Discuss whether you agree or disagree with the statement. Use relevant reasons and Examples to support your point of view. In developing and supporting your position, consider ways in which the statement might not hold true. Explain how those considerations affect your point of view.
"Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system because moral behavior cannot be legislated."
The statement "Many problems of......................cannot be legislated" is certainly a complex and controversial statement .I partially agree and partially disagree with this statement .I provide my reasons, examples and evidences in support of my point of view in the following paragraphs.
In consolidation of my point of view:
Why I agree with this statement?
In Democracy everything has to be done or followed by the law. As a citizen of the country we have to stay abide by the law, but the law system is too complicated. There are huge number of laws in the Constitution. These lead to delay in the justice ,since they have to throughly examine the situation according to the law which is also painstaking. There is a quote "Justice delayed is justice denied" . For example , if we take the Nirbhaya case where she was brutally raped and murdered by three men ,It took almost a decade to punish them because of following the law.
No law is perfect every law has it's flaws. There are people who take advantage of these loopholes to cheat the law and make huge profits especially in the economic laws. For example , In 1992, there was a man named Harshad Mehta , who read the law and took advantage of the flaws in the law system to make huge profits in the share markets. This led to the crash of whole country's economy where many people had to suffer.
Why I disagree with the Statement?
If there is no law , then the world would be in chaos . For example, in the ancient time when we look back only the strong people had all the power and used to dominate the weak people. But now since law exists the people fear to cross line and even the weak also are able to live peacefully. If there is no law , there would be chaos and violence all over to the world . So , it is mandatory to have a set of laws to maintain order. Law is required to maintain peace and harmony among Humans.
If there are no proper laws then different people can take advantage of their profession to supress others to their advantage. For example, a police officer has to follow certain laws even if he had a lot of power, if there are no strong laws against them then they can misuse their power for their personal purposes. For example, in Uttar Pradesh which is the largest state in India, police officers literally take money to do encounters. So, we need strict laws to prevent these.
Conclusion :
As I have provided irrefutable evidences in support of my point of view, I conclude my argument reiterationg that the statement "Many problems of .................. cannot be legislated" is partially acceptable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, then, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2186.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 457.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78336980306 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02596393564 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487964989059 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 691.2 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 61.6038959807 60.3974514979 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.44 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.28 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.96 5.21951772744 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.97078651685 181% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103545212505 0.243740707755 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0354623194925 0.0831039109588 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722797941489 0.0758088955206 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0981668423061 0.150359130593 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.087933280602 0.0667264976115 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 14.1392134831 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.