Claim: In order to help small businesses thrive, government should play a minimal role in
private business matters.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim.
In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons
and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The statement "Claim : In order to .................private business matters" is certainly a complex and contraversial statement.I partially agree and partially disagree with this statement
I provide my reasons,examples and evidence in support of my point of view in the following paragraphs,
In Consolidation of my point of view:
Why I disagree with this statement?
Since the Globalisation took place, many business men started expand their companies all over the world,especially when we take the example of China,they produce cheap goods and sell them
in other countries like India at a very low costs.Since,the local business people are unable to produce these goods in such low rates .They are unable to compete with these companies.So,
They eventually get shutdown.So, the Government should take the initiative to help these small businesses so they can compete atleast locally with Multi National Companies.
Economy plays a major role in the growth of a country.It is important to keep the economy of the country healthy.If a country keeps on importing good from foreign companies,then economy of
the country may become weak.So exporting own goods is also very important to neutralize the imports.If government invests in these small businesses , the produciton of goods can be increased and then it
will be able to export goods to other countries and keep their economy healthy.
Why I agree with the statement?
Presentday, most of the employent of the people in a country are in the MNCs , if these MNCs flourish then people can earn good money.So, if the government starts to help small businesses
and they flourish.People start to use those products and it effects the profits of these MNCs,which may lead to shutting down the company in that particular country.This leads to unemployment
of the people who used to work for that MNC.If more people get unemployed, may lead to economy crash and increase in crimerate and all.
Share Markets play a major role in the economy of a country.Major stocks of the share markets belong to MNCs.So, if theses companies get into loss,there will be adverse effects on the economy
of the country.So, to keep the share market in profits,Government has to support these MNCs so the share market Blooms.If a share market crashes there will be drastic downfall in the economy
of the country which again leads to unemployment, and all.
Conclusion:As I have provided irrefutable evidance in support of my point of view, I conclude my argument reiterating that statement "Claim : In order to .................private business matters"
is partially acceptable.
- Discuss whether you agree or disagree with the statement Use relevant reasons and Examples to support your point of view In developing and supporting your position consider ways in which the statement might not hold true Explain how those considerations a 50
- Critique the reasoning used in the argument below You are not being asked to discuss your point of view on the argument You should identify and analyze the central elements of the argument the underlying assumptions that are being made and any supporting 55
- Claim In order to help small businesses thrive government should play a minimal role in private business matters Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim In developing and supporting your position be s 80
- Claim In order to help small businesses thrive government should play a minimal role in private business matters Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim In developing and supporting your position be s 50
- Company X has just switched to a 4 day workweek mandating that employees work 10 hours per day from Monday to Thursday instead of 8 hours per day from Monday to Friday Although the policy is new Company X claims that the policy will help to increase profi 55
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, then, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 58.6224719101 118% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2251.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 416.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41105769231 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.43776792401 2.79657885939 123% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483173076923 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 670.5 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.2370786517 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 59.0 23.0359550562 256% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 170.831101694 60.3974514979 283% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 321.571428571 118.986275619 270% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 59.4285714286 23.4991977007 253% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 5.21951772744 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 19.0 4.97078651685 382% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 33.0 7.80617977528 423% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186292398314 0.243740707755 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960099674737 0.0831039109588 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0338239207938 0.0758088955206 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0603503070252 0.150359130593 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491709418116 0.0667264976115 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.8 14.1392134831 239% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 11.59 48.8420337079 24% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.92365168539 184% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.3 12.1743820225 216% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.99 12.1639044944 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.38706741573 121% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 11.8971910112 244% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.6 11.2143820225 228% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.