Discussing controversial topics with those with contrasting views is not useful because very few people change their mind when questioned about their core beliefs. Write a response to the prompt in which you discuss whether or not you agree or disagree. Be certain to fully develop your position and carefully consider ways in which your position could be challenged.
Discussing certain controversial topics with people brainwashed or unflinching about their core beliefs is certainly not very useful. In today's world it is not only useless but also very dangerous to discuss about controversial topics.
People nowadays are triggered by even a minor remark which they do not agree with. And with social media at everyone's disposal, people have made it a mission to have "cancel" people who do not agree with their personal views and beliefs. Take for example, the actor celebrity, Steve Johnson who was always in the limelight for his amazing roles until he was asked to express his opinion about LGBTQ rights. This opinion ended up being the downfall of his career because people of that community found it "offensive". Now the actor wasn't proposing any change but simply sharing his thoughts. So discussing such controversial topics can bring the downfall of even the most accomplished personalities.
Another sensitive topic which people get easily get offended by is religion and race. Governments are capitalising on race and religion divides for their vote banks, and are spreading false propaganda and trying to brainwash citizens which is causing a greater strife across various factions in the society. Even when people try to question the significance of a certain religious practice out of curiosity, people think of it as though the person is making fun of their religion. And there is no one more dangerous than a person who thinks that his religious sentiments have been hurt.
There are certainly some controversial topics that people across the world have been discussing with open minds and which has brought about a positive impact. All in all, it is mostly futile to have people with contrasting view points discuss controversial topics given how humans are hard-wired to handle oppositions to their core beliefs
- Discussing controversial topics with those with contrasting views is not useful because very few people change their mind when questioned about their core beliefs Write a response to the prompt in which you discuss whether or not you agree or disagree Be 50
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- Science and technology will one day be able to solve all of society s problems Write a response to the prompt in which you discuss whether or not you agree or disagree Be certain to fully develop your position and carefully consider ways in which your pos 33
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 552, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
...it 'offensive'. Now the actor wasnt proposing any change but simply sharing...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 2235.4752809 71% => OK
No of words: 302.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27152317881 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96322651384 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586092715232 0.4932671777 119% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 704.065955056 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.650932473 60.3974514979 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.714285714 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.14285714286 5.21951772744 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357202970701 0.243740707755 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122639563683 0.0831039109588 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.095416201822 0.0758088955206 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237638261822 0.150359130593 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0935446342562 0.0667264976115 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 100.480337079 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.