The effectiveness of a country's leaders is best measured by examining the well-being of that country's citizens. [Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.]
To begin with, leaders are responsible for ensuring people’s quality of life, because people’s well-being indicates stable income. Governments have to solve the emergency problems from economic fields such as financial crisis. For example, Obama is a effectiveness of a country leader; In his precedency, he addressed the global financial crisis and included a major stimulus package, including legislation to reform health care and a major financial regulation reform bill. As he force those effective policies, the United States’ people have stable life. Thus, the well-being country has such great leader that the people’s quality of life can be ensuring. All in all, well-being is an indicator that measures leader’s effectiveness.
On the other hand, since people’s well-being also refers to a stable living environment, leaders are in charge of creating a safe living environment. If some factors, such as increasing crime rate, and riots in the country, destroy social stability, an effective leaders must solve these in time. For instance, COVID-19 has constantly killed the people in the world because of people’s remising in the beginning. Such a brutal virus was unprecedent that people was incapable of dealing with. Fortunately, there are lot of effective leaders in the world; With effective policies, the casualty is decline in the recently. In sum, well-being refers citizen’s stable living environment.
Further, people’s well-being is social welfare. A leader’s responsibility is increasing people’s level of life, improving people’s burden of life; the work efficiency of leaders can be immediately observing from people’s social welfare. Compulsory education can be an illustration. In Taiwan, governments manage education information, including admission requirement test, and arranging curriculum; With such efforts of government, the admission test can hold on schedule constantly. In brief, well-being indicate the social welfare of citizens, which refers to governments’ efficiency.
To sum up, because whether quality of life, stable living environment, and social welfare are associate with work efficiency of leader, which refers to well-being of citizens. As a results, well-being of citizens is best way to measure the effectiveness of country’s leader. With such reasons, I totally agree with what the speaker says.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 250, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...financial crisis. For example, Obama is a effectiveness of a country leader; In h...
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Line 1, column 482, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'forces'.
Suggestion: forces
...financial regulation reform bill. As he force those effective policies, the United St...
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Line 3, column 264, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'leader'?
Suggestion: leader
... destroy social stability, an effective leaders must solve these in time. For instance,...
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Line 7, column 180, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a result' or simply 'results'?
Suggestion: a result; results
...ch refers to well-being of citizens. As a results, well-being of citizens is best way to...
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Line 7, column 190, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to well-being of citizens. As a results, well-being of citizens is best way to me...
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Line 7, column 215, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
.... As a results, well-being of citizens is best way to measure the effectiveness of cou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in brief, such as, as a result, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 33.0505617978 27% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2037.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 351.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.80341880342 5.05705443957 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1457352396 2.79657885939 112% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527065527066 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 620.1 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.38483146067 251% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.3974484409 60.3974514979 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.85 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.55 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 5.21951772744 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268827759533 0.243740707755 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103315972136 0.0831039109588 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.087084258043 0.0758088955206 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199177701845 0.150359130593 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0772897301654 0.0667264976115 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 14.1392134831 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 48.8420337079 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.06 12.1639044944 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.