The effectiveness of a country's leaders is best measured by examining the well-being of that country's citizens. [Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.]
The speaker asserts that examining well-being of country’s citizens is best way to measure the effectiveness of country’s leader. Maybe someone think a country’s well-being just a one index that can measure people’s life. However, in my point of view, well-being reflect many indicators of life: people’s quality of life, stable living environment, and social welfare. With these reasons, I strongly agree with the speaker.
To begin with, leaders are responsible for ensuring people’s quality of life, because people’s well-being indicates stable income. Governments have to solve the emergency problems from economic fields such as financial crisis. For example, Obama is a high efficiency leader; In his precedency, he addressed the global financial crisis and included a major stimulus package, including legislation to reform health care and a major financial regulation reform bill. With those effective policies, the United States’ people have stable life. Thus, the higher well-being country has such great leader that the people’s quality of life can be ensuring. All in all, well-being is an indicator that measures leader’s effectiveness.
On the other hand, since people’s well-being also refers to a stable living environment, leaders are in charge of creating a safe living environment. If some factors, such as increasing crime rate, and riots in the country, destroy social stability, an effective leaders must solve these in time; For instance, COVID-19 has constantly killed the people in the world because of people’s remising in the beginning. Such a brutal virus was unprecedented that people was incapable of dealing with. Fortunately, there are lot of effective leaders in the world; With effective policies, the casualty is decline in the recently. In sum, well-being refers citizen’s stable living environment.
Further, people’s well-being is social welfare; A leader’s responsibility is increasing people’s level of life, improving people’s burden of life. The work efficiency of leaders can be immediately observing from the public social welfare. Compulsory education can be an illustration. In Taiwan, governments manage education information, including admission requirement test, and arranging curriculum; With such efforts of governments, the admission test can hold on schedule constantly. In brief, well-being indicate the social welfare of citizens, which refers to governments’ efficiency.
To sum up, whether quality of life, stable living environment, and social welfare are associate with work efficiency of leader, which refers to well-being of citizens. Therefore, well-being of citizens is best way to measure the effectiveness of country’s leader. I totally agree with what the speaker says.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 69, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
...mining well-being of country’s citizens is best way to measure the effectiveness of cou...
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Line 1, column 145, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'thinks'.
Suggestion: thinks
...ness of country’s leader. Maybe someone think a country’s well-being just a one index...
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Line 5, column 264, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'leader'?
Suggestion: leader
... destroy social stability, an effective leaders must solve these in time; For instance,...
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Line 9, column 203, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
...zens. Therefore, well-being of citizens is best way to measure the effectiveness of cou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in brief, such as, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 33.0505617978 39% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2380.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 408.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.83333333333 5.05705443957 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12244897799 2.79657885939 112% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 215.323595506 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502450980392 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 718.2 704.065955056 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 13.0 4.38483146067 296% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.6858820603 60.3974514979 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.47826087 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7391304348 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08695652174 5.21951772744 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303459956481 0.243740707755 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119383085314 0.0831039109588 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102390862174 0.0758088955206 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221073423009 0.150359130593 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0848930917271 0.0667264976115 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 48.8420337079 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.24 12.1639044944 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 100.480337079 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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