field of study
Undoubtedly, one of the foremost anad paramount ambitions of all human beings is being prosperous, and they allways make an effort to attain this purpose. However, success has different meanings among people, and there are a lot of factors that have effects on it. Indeed, the field people choose to study in university plays a significant role in their future life. While a large number of people believe that college students should consider only their talents and their interests when choosing a field of study rather than the availability of jobs in that field, others agree with the adverese idea. Nevertheless, in my point of view, although considering talen and interest has a number of positive aspectes, making decision based on the availability of job has more benefits.
Choosing the field of study based on the talent and interest has countless advantages for college students, such as causing them to be satisfied as well as leading them to inovate new job oportunities. It is obvious that if people want to have a better society, they should utilize their abilities to provide new ideas to solve problems or to enhance the quality of living. However, this desire could not be accomplished if students only choose their field based on the avaiability of jobs and ignore their interest. Almost all college students are motivated and their purpose of studying is provide a better life for themselves. It causes them to do works with high energy and make their best to do works perfectly. When they have talent and inetrest in a work, this motivation would be more, and attempting to utilize their talents would bring them a staisfactory. Moreover, this interest and talent would give them an ability to be creative and provide more job oportunities.
Despite what mentioend before, it is not inevitable that choosing field of study based on the availability of job in that field also has a number of benefits for students, such as causing them to have a safe life without any anxieties as well as leading them to reach their desires sooner. It is true that the purpose of people in going universities is providing a good life for themselves and their family in the future, and studying in university is beneficial for them in a way that can cause them to have a wide variety of choices of jobs. Therefore, people go to university to be able too choose a preferable job in future. However, it is possible that if they only consider they talen and interest, they would not be able to find any job after graduation. If it happens, they would experience hard moments that would cause them to always have stress about their future. On the other hand, if they choose a field that gurantee them a job in future, they would study in university wouthout any anxieties, and graduate with high grades. After that they would easily find a prferable job in a city they like, and it is the situation that is desirable for all people. In addition, if they can find easily job after graduation, they would be able to increase their experiences and to have a better chance for better jobs with higher salaries. Indeed, high salary would make them buy what they require and what bring them enjoy and delight.
In recapitulation, each person depending on his characteristics and his temparements prefer to either choose his filed of study in college based on his talent and interest or based on the availability of job in that field. Based on what discussed above, poeple would profit more by choosing a field that gurantee a job for them. However, it does not mean that talent and iterest does not have any importance. They could utilize their talent in the field that has more job oprtunity, and follow their interest along it in their free time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'provided'.
Suggestion: provided
...ivated and their purpose of studying is provide a better life for themselves. It causes...
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Line 3, column 590, Rule ID: TOO_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to choose'?
Suggestion: to choose
...ore, people go to university to be able too choose a preferable job in future. However, it...
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, while, as to, in addition, such as, as well as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 14.8657303371 175% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 83.0 33.0505617978 251% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 90.0 58.6224719101 154% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3100.0 2235.4752809 139% => OK
No of words: 646.0 442.535393258 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79876160991 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.0414809386 4.55969084622 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63064816903 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 215.323595506 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.397832817337 0.4932671777 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 993.6 704.065955056 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 6.24550561798 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 1.0 0.740449438202 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 1.77640449438 394% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.763579138 60.3974514979 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 118.986275619 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.84 23.4991977007 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64 5.21951772744 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 10.2758426966 214% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201584486797 0.243740707755 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766559403211 0.0831039109588 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101026389691 0.0758088955206 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170433937088 0.150359130593 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471825894988 0.0667264976115 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 138.0 100.480337079 137% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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