Financial education should be a mandatory component of the school program To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement
It is not uncommon among people to completely feel clueless when they first encounter the problem of managing finance in their professional lives. The prompt suggests that financial education should be made a compulsory subject for all students in their basic education. I strongly agree with this suggestion for two key reasons.
To begin, finance like any other subject such as science or history has practical implications in one’s life. If a student is taught about the principles of finance and managing money in their basic education, they will not be completely unaware of their personal finances when they step into the adult life. Being educated in finance will make an individual independent in dealing with financial problems and making complex financial decision. They will not need the help of a finance professional for every small problem they encounter in money matters. Finance is found in the most basic aspects of one’s life such as- setting a monthly budget for one’s family, tax filing, taking on or repaying loans etc. Such fundamental finance tasks will not need hiring a finance expert if one is properly aware of the principles of finance. So, to get through the basic financial tasks of life in a current world, financial education should be mandatory along with other basic subjects.
Moreover, being educated in finance will help one understand the proper worth of money. Students will learn to manage their resources and money in a more effective way rather than wasting it. Nowadays, when a youth gets their first job, they spend their money in wasteful manner due to lack of proper financial education. Whereas, if they were taught about managing resources and finance at an earlier age, they would have had the proper knowledge of investing and managing resources. So, financial education will aid every individual in comprehending the proper value of managing and investing resources.
To conclude, just like science and history, finance is also a practical knowledge of the world and proper education in finance from an earlier age helps an individual understand the worth of investing and saving money. In addition, a basic financial education will make people independent in making any financial decision.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, so, whereas, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 12.9106741573 194% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1890.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 363.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20661157025 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66423801707 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476584022039 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.619567168 60.3974514979 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.176470588 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3529411765 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.52941176471 5.21951772744 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132583464883 0.243740707755 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585941843169 0.0831039109588 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688464979077 0.0758088955206 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0970272065683 0.150359130593 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346755502628 0.0667264976115 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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