It is not uncommon among parents or teachers to resort to extreme punishment when a child deviates to the wrong path. The given prompt also suggests that punishment will teach children about the differences between right and wrong from their childhood. However, I do not agree with this opinion mainly for one reason which I will be discussing in the essay. And I will also discuss about what punishments are appropriate for teaching them the difference between good and bad.
Strict Punishment and putting restraints on a child without explaining the differences between right and wrong will not help them understand the consequences of wrong behavior or mistakes. It will not only increase frustration in the child as he will not be aware of why a certain activity is wrong or why he was punished for it. Rather, when the child grows up to be an independent person, he will feel that he is now free to make any decisions that his parents and teachers put a restriction on without realizing its consequences.
Instead of aimlessly admonishing children, if adults teach them to take responsibilities of their own actions, it will help the children more to learn good behavior and avoid repeating mistakes. For instance, if a child breaks a vase in the fit of anger, he should be made to understand the value of the vase and if he were to given chores by his parents till he could make up the cost of the vase, the child will better understand the value of the vase and how hard work went behind buying the vase. And next time, he will understand that destruction in the fit of anger will not bring any good.
To conclude, punishing and rebuking children aimlessly for their mistakes will not teach them to distinguish between right and wrong. Rather, explaining to them why a certain behavior is considered wrong will effectively teach them about good behavior.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79813664596 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73148783801 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481366459627 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.9450880722 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.75 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8333333333 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.91666666667 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234950413638 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110105334518 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701412140825 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161620748227 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0842758491077 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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