The function of the science is to reasure; the purpose of the art is to upset. Therein lies the value of each.”
The speaker claims that there are some values in the art and the science. Me too, Believe that in this sophisticated and the progressive world where we live all of the field that human work have some sort of values, which make the field more favorable and interesting to human to continue. The reasons to substantiated my viewpoint are elaborated upon hereunder.
The chief reason why I think so is that they maybe deleted during the human history if they don’t have any sort of purpose. We all see some sort of art that some group of nations had done during their govern. However, after they collapse some but not all of their arts were collapse because of their lack of meaning and purpose. I think that they were evade during the generation since their decedent didn’t find this sort of task meaningful. For instance, in the country where I live, people are going to national parks or nature on the thirteenth day of year because they believe that by this way they will have better and fecund year, while youngest find it meaningless. Therefore, based on the conses we see that every year few and fewer people are join to this sort of events. As you can see how duration of a art and science are depend to its meaning and the favor.
Secondly, I thought that best way to describe the statement instead of its value is it’s use during the daily life of the people. We all know that people give respect and value to the staffs that they usually use. For example, we see all kind of painting in the caves which were drawing for different purposes such as hunting, gift to gods, some sort of problems that they have to handle. By this way, their painter try to illustrate some sort of the fear, jubilant or different feeling. By each passing day human improve their understanding from the art and find more way to describe their thinking and feeling to the contemporary or next generation. In other word, we can discuss with our ancestors and use their experience instead of make it again and again. I believe that this kind of important feature of the art and science gives them meaning and values.
The last reasons that come to my mind is that art and science drive for the nature, so that’s why they will have value. The root of all branches of science and art come from the nature. For instance we experiment the Newton laws all of the days. However, some gifted people reveal them and render better way to humankind to solve their other problems with them. As we all know every thing in the world subtlely are depend to each other and human as the intelligent of the creature try to use their dependents and relation to make life easier to all of the creatures.
In sum, taking aforementioned reasons and examples into account as the speaker I believe that art and science have some important values.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...and the progressive world where we live all of the field that human work have some sort of...
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...wpoint are elaborated upon hereunder. The chief reason why I think so is that...
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Suggestion: evaded
...ing and purpose. I think that they were evade during the generation since their deced...
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Suggestion: while the youngest
... they will have better and fecund year, while youngest find it meaningless. Therefore, based o...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Suggestion: depended
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Suggestion:
...science gives them meaning and values. The last reasons that come to my mind is...
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Suggestion: depended
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...nts and relation to make life easier to all of the creatures. In sum, taking aforement...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i think, kind of, sort of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 14.8657303371 175% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.3162921348 186% => OK
Pronoun: 69.0 33.0505617978 209% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 58.6224719101 118% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2334.0 2235.4752809 104% => OK
No of words: 506.0 442.535393258 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61264822134 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7428307748 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39461437526 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.442687747036 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 724.5 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4265991812 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.47826087 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.39130434783 5.21951772744 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127610401613 0.243740707755 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047560051122 0.0831039109588 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460199919945 0.0758088955206 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0828363279397 0.150359130593 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235719429556 0.0667264976115 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.1392134831 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 48.8420337079 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 12.1639044944 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 100.480337079 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.