Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization.
Why might this be the case?
What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
In this developec and progressive world, there are sort of works that a person can start and get succesful on it. Considering this fact, most of the people nowadays love to work for themselfs for more flexibility and creativity. On the opposite side, the other group believe that working in a organization with a group of people is more reliable. even though both type of working are very important and neccesery for the industry development, each of them has their own advantage and disadvantage. In this essay, I want to mention a few reasons why people loves self-employed and why it may be dangreous for a person career. my reasons are as the follow.
First of all, it's really fancy to leadig yourself. I mean it's more easier for some to wake up go to work and end your work at the time that you want. however, being your own boss has few disadvantages if you can't organize every step well. One of the main reasons of the backrupcy is that a person thinks
Secondly, its easier than applying for too many jobs. you just need to an idea about how you need to start a new work. Then everything continues step by step. however, I believe without a leader who force a person for continuting and doing new thing you cant exactly florish your talent. A group and a leader can help you to get the highest knowlerge ans sharoining your skill in a task.
Thirdly, many people believe that they can get all of the profit of a work if they works for themselfs. however, they also need tot think to the other sinario too. Each work has two outcomes getting successful or becoming a loser. I believe that by workign for a company profit will divide between all of the members as well as the the default. also, we cant over look the power of group working. Each person has different skills at the same time they can be more creative by listening to the other persons idea. we all remember has an experience that oue skills get florished by sharing ideas, solutions and probabile outcome.
Taking to the account of the aforemention reasons and examples. even though self employment is more easier form most fo the aspects, it has too many disadvantages. In my opinion it just has two type of out comes. if you have the ability to manage well ,you get a huge profit, or else you will faced with bankrupcy which os more common on selfe employed works.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, look, may, really, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, well, as to, i mean, sort of, as well as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1918.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 425.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51294117647 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5018747296 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 599.4 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.8943299093 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.72 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.32 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 36.0 5.01903807615 717% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22961556626 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559868421634 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721873498202 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126449062852 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0743017170723 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 12.4159519038 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.