Government officials should rely on their own judgement rather than unquestionably carry out the will of the people they serve
Disinterested judgement is the integral part of democracy. Democracy will be in jeopardy situation if citizens of nation stop believing it. Even tough democracy is bounded by the constitution of respective country, judgement should not be manipulated by any factors. Government officials should also take care to maintain law, order and impartial judgement for everyone. However, the severity of judgement can vary according to the guilt but should not be compromised.
Firstly, Government officials are bureaucrats which has been appointed according to process of election. In 2022, Government of India formed a bill (law) to open all the food processing markets open to every citizen of India. The law came with rigorous riots and affectation to revert it back by the farmers of Punjab province. The government formed law without taking concern of people into consideration which lead to instability. If government would have taken people demand into consideration before forming law this wouldn't had aroused.
Government should always take people view under consideration before starting, developing or deploying any means of judgement. For example, Russia invaded Ukraine in February 2022 without taking people into considerations and its affects which people will be suffering. Some citizens might face sanctions on their business, inflation might skyrocket, education of toddler will be quite expensive, citizens might laid off due to limited earnings of tech companies. If government don't follow the path it may result in havoc conditions which will be mainly suffered by citizens along with government officials. This even can make country unstable and result in recession.
There are some situations where government should not take citizens view into consideration like for example, there was Pulwama attack in India by terrorists on Army vehicle in order to revenge the death of peripheral terrorist. At the same moment tracked and downed the suspected terrorist of attack. The citizens of Kashmir province came into support of culprit who killed innocent Army officials.
By taking above examples into consideration it totally depends on government to follow the path of democracy or obey the citizens will. Judgement should not affect innocent citizens and result in worst crisis in country. Even the government should always try to be impartial and not vert the judgement in expense of citizen's life or future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...onsideration which lead to instability. If government would have taken people dema...
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Message: Did you mean 'had taken'?
Suggestion: had taken
...hich lead to instability. If government would have taken people demand into consideration before...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...o consideration before forming law this wouldnt had aroused. Government should always...
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Suggestion:
...aking people into considerations and its affects which people will be suffering. ...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... to limited earnings of tech companies. If government dont follow the path it may ...
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...rnings of tech companies. If government dont follow the path it may result in havoc ...
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...not affect innocent citizens and result in worst crisis in country. Even the government ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 33.0505617978 24% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 58.6224719101 111% => OK
Nominalization: 29.0 12.9106741573 225% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2052.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 375.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.472 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88390352744 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541333333333 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 644.4 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.438807045 60.3974514979 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7142857143 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8571428571 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85714285714 5.21951772744 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 5.13820224719 234% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199575002427 0.243740707755 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670066579418 0.0831039109588 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448622345483 0.0758088955206 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121251540316 0.150359130593 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508373268691 0.0667264976115 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 14.1392134831 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 100.480337079 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.