Government officials should rely on their own judgment rather than unquestioningly carry out the will of the people they serve.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
The government job is the most dynamic and challenging job in the job market, and government officials have a lot of prime responsibilites to perform. The notion states that government officials should rely on their own judgment rather than unquestioningly carry out the will of the people they serve. However, it is matter of greate debate that how the government officials should behave and perform their responsibility. While I partially agree with the statement, but I believe that government officials should respect and show interest on the people they serve to solve their problems.
Firstly, government officials go througha regorius process to become a officials, and they use a lost of time to prepare for the job, in addition, they have a good academic background. After the slecetion they go thourgh a trainging program conducted by the government to learn how to perform their responsibility, which give them a certain skill set, critical thinking, and problem-solving ability. They gather a lots of experience through their career and apply them in critical situation. They need to maintaint the government law and oder to perform their job and through these process they become more competent and skilled to make a judgement based on their skill, experiance and judgement.
Additionally, people are the main power of the nation, and they are main service taker from the government. Government official mainly work for the betterment of the poeples, but there are a loy of group of peoples in the society, and each group has differnt interest and judgements based on their experieance. Some judgement will help some group, on the ther hand, some group will be distrubed. But officials need to maintain the law and oder of the government, which is the main responsibility of the officials, but they should use their one judgmenet to make the best decisions.
However, all government officials don’t have equal experience and judgemental skill to perform a job precisely, and it varys from person to person. All areas, group of peoples, or al issues are not equally important to maintaint the law and oder very strictly. Culture, tradition differ from one place to another and every place has an unique environment and demand. So sometimes government offical need to take account the will of the people they serve otherwise there will be some serious issues. For instance, in India Hindus people are mojority, so a muslim official should sometimes see the greater interst of the societyn otherwise there will be some bad consequences and the law and oder will be ditrubed, and in such
situtation or for the better good of the soceity officials should take people will. On the other thand, if the officials only rely on their judgement corruption will increase and the service wil be degraded
In conclusion, government officials should rely on their own judgment but for the good of the soceity sometime they sholud unquestioningly carry out the will of the people they serve.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, so, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 31.0 14.8657303371 209% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 34.0 12.9106741573 263% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2518.0 2235.4752809 113% => OK
No of words: 491.0 442.535393258 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1283095723 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70728369723 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87186519958 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.446028513238 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 767.7 704.065955056 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 12.0 1.77640449438 676% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.3230897621 60.3974514979 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.888888889 118.986275619 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2777777778 23.4991977007 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72222222222 5.21951772744 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324306549431 0.243740707755 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115474069148 0.0831039109588 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108567306695 0.0758088955206 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203341654975 0.150359130593 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0992092020192 0.0667264976115 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 14.1392134831 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 100.480337079 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.