Government officials should rely on their own judgment rather than unquestioningly carry out the will of the people whom they serve
government officials, as the policy and decision makers, undoubtedly play a significant role in a country's peace and prosperity, especially in the era of rapid development. it is of critical importance, thus, for the governors making legitimate judgment on the domestic issues and international relationships. Though I concede with the statement on the part that the anthorities should avoid unquestioning execution of people's will, I think the key point in their decision-making process should be listening to various voices from the general publie and finding the equilibrium between their own judgment and their compariots' requests.
According to the history of civilizations, citizens are always the foundation of any country. For a country to strive, the authority should never stand on the opposite side of its people. Instead, successful leaders know to respect, serve and listen to their people's requests and questions. that is to say, a government worship dictation is doomed to failure. For example, Joseph Stalin, once the national hero and so call steel-willed man, was given the name of dictator of the Dark Period of the Soviet Union after his death. The reason is that he was surrounded by officials with the similar mindset with him and no longer listened to his people's need.
On the other hand, overly submissive and servile to their citizens falls in the other extreme of the spectrum of governance failure. leaders, of an organization or of a country, is supposed to have their resolusive determination and the charisma of leadership. There is no one hundred percent democracy in any corner of the world, even in the most free countries, such as Northern Europe. The effective and productive form is called the consensus democracy, as opposed to the majority democracy, where the governments take into account of all their citizens' thoughts and opinions on the public and international issues. it effectively avoid the issue of majority biases and is conducive to a more stable and satisfactory territory.
To sum up, out of the consideration of freedom, prosperity and stability, the government should emphasis both their desicive leadership and their ability to service their citizens. The key lies in the balance between them tow.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, thus, for example, i think, such as, to sum up, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1905.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 360.0 442.535393258 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29166666667 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05232025689 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594444444444 0.4932671777 121% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.795561914 60.3974514979 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0625 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 5.21951772744 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245747483246 0.243740707755 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058927278415 0.0831039109588 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642598158571 0.0758088955206 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13784027273 0.150359130593 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496562066363 0.0667264976115 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 14.1392134831 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.1743820225 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.38706741573 116% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 100.480337079 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 11.8971910112 134% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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