Government officials should rely on their own judgment rather than unquestioningly carry out the will of the people they serve.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
In a society, people select a government to carry out the necessary duties on behalf of them and then, the government select the officials to bring justice to the society and carry out the work that require to be done to built a better society. The prompt suggest that the government officials should rely on their own judgment than blindly follow the people’s wish. I strongly agree with the given prompt that government officials or any other peoples who are in a position of power should rely on himself or herself to make a decision for better good.
While we live in a time where unquestioningly follow the will of upper hand seems beneficials and consider the good judgment, the morality of the people should not die. People in the power position should take the responsibility of his position and carry out his or her work, and it should be the work ethics of the people in society specially for an government official. A government official is not like any other person in society who work solely for him, he has to consider the consequences of his decisions and the country’s ethics and culture, he must not take any decision haphazardly or under the pressure of superiors. It is understandable that the culture and ethics of a country can influence his decisions but it is not understandable why his decisions was not correct for the person who seeks justice. For example, if a police officer caught a person for violating the traffic by bumping the car next to it which left a mere scrach, it is not right to put him jail because the damaged car owner want him in jail or make him pay for the broken mirror which was not broken in this accident. The point is the officer must thoroughly examine the case before making any decision and not only hear one side or the popular opinion.
It is highly possible that people want justice but government officials are not capable of hearing it out or carry it out because of the corrupt government. But it a different scenario, it is a play of morality and who are honest in duty for the very people they are assigned to sere. While it is necessary to hear out the people they serve but they must have sound judgement of the case they are judging. For example, if a judge rule in favor of a corrupt government ignoring the proof and the opinion of people, it is simply the degradation of the position he is serving, nothing more.
Government officials are people like us and it is very much possible to affect by the opinion people gave in any case but it’s the job requirement of the officials to use their own judgements in every government task they do. The people opinion may be rife with assumptions but a government officials should rely on the facts he have seen and made conclusive assumptions from the facts.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 41, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...In a society, people select a government to carry out the necessary duties on beh...
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Line 2, column 302, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...est that the government officials should rely on their own judgment than blindly ...
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Line 2, column 463, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t officials or any other peoples who are in a position of power should rely on hi...
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Line 3, column 349, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... of the people in society specially for an government official. A government offic...
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Line 5, column 73, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...like us and it is very much possible to affect by the opinion people gave in any case but...
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Line 5, column 330, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...t officials should rely on the facts he have seen and made conclusive assumptions fr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, then, while, as to, for example, in any case
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 14.8657303371 175% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 12.9106741573 170% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2286.0 2235.4752809 102% => OK
No of words: 497.0 442.535393258 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59959758551 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72159896747 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62441357404 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.420523138833 0.4932671777 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 735.3 704.065955056 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 23.0359550562 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.4037335521 60.3974514979 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.4 118.986275619 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.1333333333 23.4991977007 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.13333333333 5.21951772744 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263895429469 0.243740707755 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100359685044 0.0831039109588 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071524907631 0.0758088955206 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180361819229 0.150359130593 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563557500996 0.0667264976115 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 14.1392134831 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 48.8420337079 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.8971910112 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 11.2143820225 136% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.7820224719 144% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.