Government should offer a free university education to any student who has not been admitted to a university but who cannot afford the tutions

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Government should offer a free university education to any student who has not been admitted to a university but who cannot afford the tutions.

Submitted by Jankip on Wed, 06/17/2020 - 14:32

The debate about the education fees has been aroused now a days and discussion has been going on from very long time. the education system is being neglected consistently by the government in terms to discussion the form the strict rule to reduce the fees in favor of the middle and low class people. the concern of the author is very considerable with respect to the student who are highly intelligent and mentally capable to achieve the higher score to be qualified by the top ranked universities but also afraid of having a similar background as compare to the university class.
there are many argument to support this claim, first, In today's competitive world, all education institute fees are rapidly increasing every year. If we analyse and compare the fraction of total income of low to middle class person, it would be Approximately almost 40%. which is too much high and also not affordable to many of them.hence the government must take initiative to do scrutinize and dictate the amended or revised policy which may hinder the unstoppable increment in tution fees.
Moreover, Education system has become a pure business now a days. earlier, to educate or to teach a needed student was considered as a respectful social task. Today, universities are interested in the money only. they argue that the fees are used to develop the facilities. but modernization has changed the perspective and priorities of every universities. it must be taken into consideration.
further, there is not relation between knowledge and wealth. there are numerous students who are talented and achieve top rank to get admission in well know universities. government should allocate a fund and provide it to the deserving candidate systematically. it would definitely inspire the student who actually want to make the bright future.it will encourage the person who somehow has become tired and hate our education system.
however, if there may be a chance that the subsidies or free sites allocated by the university with the help of government, the candidate who has been facilitated by it take the system for granted. he may not value the privilege given to him and do not pay attention in the study and change his priority.but with the help of well developed program which include the proper selection criteria, we can avoid this negative side.
In conclusion,considering the all perspective presented above, the policy must be develop to support the deserving intelligent candidate so they get inspire by it and achieve their goal.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, in conclusion, with respect to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2120.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 416.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09615384615 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.972071678 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540865384615 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 696.6 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.7823222772 60.3974514979 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.578947368 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8947368421 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42105263158 5.21951772744 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 7.80617977528 320% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25236740572 0.243740707755 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626582335682 0.0831039109588 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615527448535 0.0758088955206 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110472044182 0.150359130593 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709862436315 0.0667264976115 106% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 14.1392134831 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 100.480337079 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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