The government should ultimately be responsible for the health, welfare and prosperity of its own citizens.
Write a response discussing your reaction to the stated policy.Justify your reasoning for the position you take.
The well-being of people is a duty of the nation they belong to. The nation, or the government, must frame policies to improve the living condition of its citizens. It is the one that should ultimately be held responsible for the health, welfare and prosperity of its citizens.
The main responsibilities of a nation should be the improving health and welfare of its citizens and making them prosperous. If not that, what exactly is the use of living together in a nation? The early humans formed agricultural societies for mutual gain. Had the societal structure of life not benefit us in the past, we wouldn't have stuck to it for thousands of years. Thus, it is imperative that nations work according to the policy of betterment of its citizens to prevent their own demise. Otherwise, it is better to live as hunter gatherer when one has to look for his own need.
Most nations have fundamental duties assigned for its citizens. By the same logic, it is a duty of the nation to take care of its population. Just like paying taxes is a duty of the citizens, it is the duty of a nation to work for betterment of its people. The tax paid by the citizens should be used for building infrastructure and running services that make life easier for a citizen. The nation should also provides opportunities for citizens to grow. All of this leads to more prosperous citizens and the nation as a whole.
As a result of the nation working for betterment of its people, it is the nation itself that will reap benefits. The fate of any nation is determined by that of its people. A more prosperous citizen will be happier. This, consequently, will create an atmosphere of happiness and prosperity in the country. Peace within the nation makes a government's work easy. There will be more innovations and inventions, now that people don't have to worry about petty things, which will benefit the nation even further. So, for its own benefit, the nation must take care of the benefit of its citizens.
To recapitulate, people started living together to make life easier and the betterment of each life make the collective society better. People pay taxes to live as a nation and these taxes must be used for the benefit of the people, or else there is no use living together. Hence, the main aim of a nation must be improving the health, welfare and prosperity of its citizens.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
... of life not benefit us in the past, we wouldnt have stuck to it for thousands of years...
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Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'provide'
Suggestion: provide
...r for a citizen. The nation should also provides opportunities for citizens to grow. All...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a government' or simply 'governments'?
Suggestion: a government; governments
... country. Peace within the nation makes a governments work easy. There will be more innovatio...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...vations and inventions, now that people dont have to worry about petty things, which...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, hence, if, look, so, thus, well, as to, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1960.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 417.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70023980815 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70888122362 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.436450839329 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 627.3 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.2107925261 60.3974514979 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.4 118.986275619 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.68 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84 5.21951772744 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 10.2758426966 204% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248840643324 0.243740707755 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0932542697879 0.0831039109588 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.094590878045 0.0758088955206 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179508830381 0.150359130593 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061504386656 0.0667264976115 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 14.1392134831 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 12.1639044944 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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