It has always been a topic of debate whether the government should focus on today’s problems or the forthcoming problems of future. Both are important in their own aspects. But it is more important to resolve the problems at hand rather than foreseeing the future problems and mitigating them first.
First of all, it is our present that makes our future. The future is followed by what we do in our present day. So, what is more important is what we do today and our past is the means through which we can learn the ways to ameliorate our present. The pitfalls of our past should not affect our present and our future and we should strive to eschew these pitfalls. The immediate problems of the country are incumbent upon the government and it is the primary responsibility of the government to address them before anything else. The future problems are repercussions of our fallacies of today. The unprecedented use of our natural resources and not harnessing the alternative renewable sources of energy adequately in today’s generation will ultimately cause future problems. Even though, it is an anticipated future problem but we can observe our natural resources perishing in front of us. It is our present problem and can be resolved at our disposal.
Secondly, there are many issues which need immediate attention. If they are not resolved at the earliest, they can take diabolical forms and eventually, they will befall on government for not addressing them at the apt time. Issues like terrorism which have taken ominous form in today’s world are the high priority issues which need to be addressed at the earliest. If it is not looked upon now, it can destroy the entire world. The forces of ISIS have grown powerful all over the world due to the ignorance of government to take immediate action against it. The motives of ISIS to become omnipotent in the world need to be crushed before it happens. The persistent problem of unemployment and accruing problem of recession are other such problems which have harrowed the today’s generation. The government needs to take appropriate steps like providing subsidiaries to the farmers, promoting the markets on international level, assisting entrepreneurs monetarily and giving financial allowances to the unemployed.
Thirdly, the environment related problems like pollution and Global Warming are those issues are a matter of concern in today’s world because they are eventually going to adversely affect our future generations. It is not only an anticipated problem of future but the current levels of pollution prevailing in our atmosphere has affected the people to an extent which already beyond our control. The harmful CFCs effusing in our environment causing carcinogenic problems and the automobiles emitting toxic gases have reduced the life expectancy of people.
As a matter of fact, all the existing issues are the anticipated issues of future. The government needs to prioritize the problems according to their severity. However, the immediate problems prevailing in the country which are affecting the today’s generation drastically needs to be addressed foremost. Only then we can progress towards a successful and healthy generation.
- All too often, companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently. If companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees, such consultants would be unnecessary. 50
- The human mind will always be superior to machines because machines are only tools of human minds.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In d 70
- All too often, companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently. If companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees, such consultants would be unnecessary. 54
- Governments should focus on solving the immediate problems of today rather than on trying to solve the anticipated problems of the future. 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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...epercussions of our fallacies of today. The unprecedented use of our natural resour...
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...d need to be crushed before it happens. The persistent problem of unemployment and ...
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...h have harrowed the today’s generation. The government needs to take appropriate st...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'third', 'thirdly', 'as a matter of fact', 'first of all', 'what is more']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.223613595707 0.240241500013 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.166368515206 0.157235817809 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0948121645796 0.0880659088768 108% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0536672629696 0.0497285424764 108% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0787119856887 0.0444667217837 177% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.11091234347 0.12292977631 90% => OK
Participles: 0.0572450805009 0.0406280797675 141% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.89438346134 2.79330140395 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0304114490161 0.030933414821 98% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.100178890877 0.0997080785238 100% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0196779964222 0.0249443105267 79% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0178890876565 0.0148568991511 120% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3227.0 2732.02544248 118% => OK
No of words: 520.0 452.878318584 115% => OK
Chars per words: 6.20576923077 6.0361032391 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77530192783 4.58838876751 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.407692307692 0.366273622748 111% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.321153846154 0.280924506359 114% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.240384615385 0.200843997647 120% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.178846153846 0.132149295362 135% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89438346134 2.79330140395 104% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 219.290929204 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.459615384615 0.48968727796 94% => OK
Word variations: 53.3773205863 55.4138127331 96% => OK
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6194690265 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.2592592593 23.380412469 82% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4388423495 59.4972553346 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.518518519 141.124799967 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2592592593 23.380412469 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.518518518519 0.674092028746 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.21349557522 77% => OK
Readability: 51.3746438746 51.4728631049 100% => OK
Elegance: 1.31137724551 1.64882698954 80% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.518640207405 0.391690518653 132% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.146761181294 0.123202303941 119% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.105390655878 0.077325440228 136% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.532245449549 0.547984918172 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.136452127177 0.149214159877 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.206163598544 0.161403998019 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133256853241 0.0892212321368 149% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.427550627755 0.385218514788 111% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0186680150739 0.0692045440612 27% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.395035007102 0.275328986314 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664800659812 0.0653680567796 102% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.4325221239 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 5.30420353982 264% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88274336283 82% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 7.22455752212 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 13.0 3.66592920354 355% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 21.0 13.5995575221 154% => OK
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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6