In today’s world, technology has evolved to the extent that will astound an Early Man if he would time travel to future. It is the result of the human innovative minds and their quest to explore the depths of knowledge that has created an apparent ‘World of Machines’. No matter how smart the machines have become, it can never be superior to the human mind.
First and foremost, the computers, which are known as the most intelligent machines of all times, are the outcome of the great human mind. Charles Babbage, known as the father of computers, was the one who gave birth to this revolutionary technology and digitized the whole world. If the computers have made mankind dependent on it, then the actuation behind it was also a man whose ingeniousness led to this invention. Nowadays, computers have become a ubiquitous part of everyday life. It is omnipresent in all forms of businesses.
Secondly, not only in digital technology, but human mind has also revolutionized the agriculture sector. Earlier, the farmers used to plough fields and irrigate them manually which would take days to complete. But nowadays, with the advent of technological era, the same work can be done efficiently in a day, thanks to the machines, which did not fall suddenly from the sky but were a result of the years of dedication given by humans to help simplify their future generation’s onus. These machines might have outsmarted humans on fields in physical terms but they can never outsmart their mental skills.
Thirdly, humans have progressed so far that they have even created their approximate analogous forms in the form of robots, which are also man-made machines. These robots can process the information without human intervention but they also need initial human coding to brag their smartness.
Hence, we can conclude that no matter, how much advanced our generation becomes, how far the technology evolves and how much our lives become dependent on these machines, the driving force will always be humans behind it. These machines are incorporeal and insignificant without humans. Neither they can be developed nor driven without human physical and mental skills. So, humans will always be superior to machines in every aspect.
- All too often, companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently. If companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees, such consultants would be unnecessary. 54
- Governments should focus on solving the immediate problems of today rather than on trying to solve the anticipated problems of the future. 60
- The human mind will always be superior to machines because machines are only tools of human minds.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In d 70
- All too often, companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently. If companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees, such consultants would be unnecessary. 50
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'hence', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'third', 'thirdly']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.230024213075 0.238963963785 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.157384987893 0.154291517835 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0847457627119 0.0886310499679 96% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0629539951574 0.0506014161523 124% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0484261501211 0.0449626384858 108% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0871670702179 0.123526278965 71% => OK
Participles: 0.0411622276029 0.0379742944744 108% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.73678390074 2.82910677849 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0290556900726 0.0316879551592 92% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0014075125626 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.10411622276 0.0950106342287 110% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0290556900726 0.0245489744465 118% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0290556900726 0.0157978311181 184% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2246.0 2899.98275862 77% => OK
No of words: 369.0 478.390804598 77% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 6.08672086721 6.0591788892 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.65681771538 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.355013550136 0.369966551584 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.265582655827 0.285172536893 93% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.192411924119 0.207245337619 93% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.132791327913 0.136322040163 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73678390074 2.82910677849 97% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 234.298850575 86% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547425474255 0.492565540709 111% => OK
Word variations: 60.8923868257 56.8184620615 107% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 21.1264367816 85% => OK
Sentence length: 20.5 23.7468607788 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5865746737 62.0618507366 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.777777778 143.81877709 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 23.7468607788 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.611111111111 0.728815259664 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.87931034483 102% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.71264367816 0% => OK
Readability: 47.0582655827 52.2641144681 90% => OK
Elegance: 1.33333333333 1.64547068916 81% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.466332232608 0.39480681544 118% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.130722354378 0.11556216369 113% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0716213132402 0.0736162880345 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.537055861682 0.531340600358 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.162964937541 0.15197228837 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.177538266968 0.158818324754 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0963964735259 0.0851127212816 113% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.332909252791 0.388921930462 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.091707185737 0.0677916285025 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.30291194664 0.28015025965 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0706547624282 0.0610219844235 116% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.8591954023 64% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30459770115 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.96264367816 161% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 8.10632183908 62% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.93390804598 25% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 6.0 3.04597701149 197% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 15.0862068966 80% => OK
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Rates: 70.10 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 4.0 Out of 6