Governments should invest as much in the arts as they do in the military.
The military is the lifeblood of a nation. The defender of its territories in time of war. little wonder that the respect garner by a country in the comity of nations can be directly link to the strength of its military base and as such demand for government to heavily invest in its because such investment is linked to the security of her people and properties.Likewise, arts reflect a way of peoples life, crux of their culture and as much deserve a worthy investment. Although the arts deserve more investment than the military owing to its comparative advantage over military
Nonetheless, nothing propagates, reform and inform outsider about a nation more than the arts- music,ma hies etc. for instance, Nigeria has a population of over 150 millions and one of the strongest military bases in the world yet, the arts has been a source of revenue for her finances. the revenues generated from music and movie industry which are the basis of arts supersedes that of the oil which is the country mainstay.e image
The art is a vital tool for redeeming the image of a society or country. In Brazil. music is at the epicenter of the nations culture. Along with football, music has tremendously help the fledgling nation to create a positive image for her people. It can also be used to propagates against negative social vices such as rape, women abuse, gender inequality and other issues that are pose threat for survival and unity in a 21st century.
Moreover the art is a platform for creating sustainable unity. this is particular to the African people who suffer multiple identity crisis owing to tribal differences. The music and their movies are good tool to create a sense of individualism and patriotism along ethnic divide. Any emerging or developing nation should invest more on arts than military since such country does not or should not be expected to go in to war which can further push the country down. art encompasses history. history is a vital ingredient in the growth of a nation. this allow younger generation to know more about their heroes; their values, struggles and unparallel achievement.
Military and arts are no doubt a vital component of a country and as such deserve heavy commitment and investment on the path of government. conclusively, i have provide ample reasons to disagree with the recommendation that governments should invest more in arts than in military.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, likewise, moreover, nonetheless, so, for instance, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2021.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 406.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97783251232 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82635977762 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519704433498 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 650.7 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 88.2927327032 60.3974514979 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.277777778 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5555555556 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.21951772744 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 7.80617977528 269% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211022022453 0.243740707755 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584788356061 0.0831039109588 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793526006785 0.0758088955206 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129877637745 0.150359130593 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0891447740379 0.0667264976115 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 14.1392134831 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 100.480337079 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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