Men and Women are owing to their innate physical differences, are not equally suited for many task
Men and Women are owing to their innate physical differences, are not equally suited for many task. This satement states the opinion of the author, which is in tandem with popular opinion. However, I dissent on this issue, owing to lack of basic proof to suggesst athe existence of innate physical or mental disparity of men and women.
Aside being a subject of trivial talks or street parlance, there has never being any physiological or medical proof of innate disparity of physical differences which makes them more sutable for some specific tasks over the each other. However, many of the percieved suitability of in executng certain tasks are more of myth than facts. for example, women make good writers as much as men, as great as James hadley Chase is, so is J.k Rowlings . Nothing suggests their writing prowess are down to thier innate gender based abillity. As this is not only valid for writers, so also it is for numerous task.
Training and skills is another factor which tends to quash the gender based task suitabillity between men and women. if a man and a woman are subjected to same rigorous training, there is no practical evidence that generally correlates abillity to perform with their sexes but rather on individual willingness to learn, intellectual strenght and other factors. For examples, the knowledge or skillset to perform task, like cooking has no gender based suitabillity as the knowledge of coooking does not come pre installed in any reproductive system rather on training and skills.
Although, certain cultural upbringing in most society particularly, society where misogynism thrives have placed certain task o the shoulder of women and as such make women more suitable and men less desirable for such tasks. This is nothing but a myth or a cultural deficiency. For example, women raised in a male dominated society tends to become more suitable to certain household tasks than thier male counterpart, yet, the men can equally as good in those chores if they so wish.
finally, i would like to disagree with the assertion that men and women, owing to thier innate physical differences are not equally suited for many task. It is not only untrue bt also lacking in substantial proof. In a culturally diverse and egalitarian society, there is no innate physical differences in men and women which makes them more or less suitable for specific tasks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, so, for example, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2010.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 399.0 442.535393258 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03759398496 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62215441002 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503759398496 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 639.0 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.0238050264 60.3974514979 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.235294118 118.986275619 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4705882353 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64705882353 5.21951772744 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 7.80617977528 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.506280904178 0.243740707755 208% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.179499627692 0.0831039109588 216% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.23690531697 0.0758088955206 313% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.309186076218 0.150359130593 206% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.162867715263 0.0667264976115 244% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 14.1392134831 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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