Governments should invest as much in the arts as they do in the military
Military-the security and the strength of the nation, and arts-culture and living of the people, both are equally important and government should consider investing in both in order to make country stronger and also civilized. When comes to the extent how much the government should invest in them depends on the current situation of the country in terms of economy, military strength, research required, threats to the nation, level of extinction in the culture, talent, recognition of the culture within country and also among all different nations.
If it is the time, when the nation is getting continuous threats from other country's forces, or when the other nations' forces are getting stronger by everyday, there gets a situation where government should invest in extensive research in defense, advancements in war weapons and also extensive training for military forces. Moreover, cost is inculcated in recruiting new forces.
When the country is strong but the country's recognition of culture and arts is not up to mark, then the government should aim to promote cultural arts among various people and also grant funds for those organisations that promote cultural well being. It should also develop institutions that teach arts and build many monuments and arts museum to attract tourism.
To recapitulate, depending on various factors affecting the areas of focus for the government to invest, it should aim to invest in both the areas in the appropriate proportions as arts represents one's country's culture and well being and helps in promoting tourism on which country's economy depends and armed forces are always the strength of the country on which peoples' safety relies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 151, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... nations forces are getting stronger by everyday, there gets a situation where governmen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 33.0505617978 21% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 2235.4752809 64% => OK
No of words: 269.0 442.535393258 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30111524164 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72759621234 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 215.323595506 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516728624535 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 704.065955056 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.2370786517 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 23.0359550562 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.292224273 60.3974514979 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 203.714285714 118.986275619 171% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.4285714286 23.4991977007 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 5.21951772744 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279632521336 0.243740707755 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138756141329 0.0831039109588 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668456576057 0.0758088955206 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175683619046 0.150359130593 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593301450949 0.0667264976115 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.7 14.1392134831 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.91 48.8420337079 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 12.1743820225 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.38706741573 115% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 100.480337079 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 11.2143820225 153% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.7820224719 161% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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