Governments should not fund any scientific research whose consequences are unclear.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
It is not uncommon for people to argue that there is no need to fund any scientific research with unclear consequences. As it is obvious that if the research doesn't have any contributions to the society, the money spent on it is wasted. However, no scientific conduction is sure to have achievement or certain result. It has some chance to fail to reach the request. That's why I hold the view that disagrees with the argument.
When considering which scientific research to support, the government should take many factors into account. Whether an experiment has consequence must be a significant factors, because it determines whether it is efficient to patron a research. However, there are other important aspects such as the time, the expense and the teamwork. The alternatives the government should consider is that the government can give less money to the research with vague result than that with incisive result. In another word, the government should analyse the research in a more comprehensible way instead of sticking to a single dimension.
Another reason why I hold the opposite view of the argument is because the features of the scientific research. It is widely accepted that conducting a scientific research includes may steps such as writing the paper, doing the experiment and writing down the result. There are many obstacles prohibit the team from the anticipating result in theses complex steps. For instance, the Edison has made hundred times of failure before he finally invent the electric light. In that case, it is nearly impossible to predict whether a research has good or bad result before it is done.
Moreover, It will lead to bad effect to the whole science field if such law is implemented. For one thing, who would be the person to judge whether the research would have consequences? If he or she has wrong analysis toward a flourishing research? For another, some people will directly give money to the officers for the hope that they want more money form the government, which will lead to partiality as well as Embezzlement.
In conclusion, I disagree with the statement as it is partial, and may lead to bad effect towards the society.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 159, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
.... As it is obvious that if the research doesnt have any contributions to the society, ...
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Line 1, column 368, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...me chance to fail to reach the request. Thats why I hold the view that disagrees with...
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Line 3, column 170, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'factor'?
Suggestion: factor
...t has consequence must be a significant factors, because it determines whether it is ef...
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Line 3, column 235, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
...mines whether it is efficient to patron a research. However, there are other important asp...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 151, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'scientific research'.
Suggestion: scientific research
.... It is widely accepted that conducting a scientific research includes may steps such as writing the ...
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Line 5, column 400, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
...teps. For instance, the Edison has made hundred times of failure before he finally inve...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 443, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'invents'.
Suggestion: invents
...dred times of failure before he finally invent the electric light. In that case, it is...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 527, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
...is nearly impossible to predict whether a research has good or bad result before it is don...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 226, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'flourishing research'.
Suggestion: flourishing research
... If he or she has wrong analysis toward a flourishing research? For another, some people will directly...
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Line 7, column 355, Rule ID: FROM_FORM[4]
Message: Did you mean 'from'?
Suggestion: from
... for the hope that they want more money form the government, which will lead to part...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, for one thing
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1826.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 365.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00273972603 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82076848519 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509589041096 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4919605441 60.3974514979 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.3 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.21951772744 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 5.13820224719 234% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175898595755 0.243740707755 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510035825183 0.0831039109588 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519767533935 0.0758088955206 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0867173817928 0.150359130593 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547090251374 0.0667264976115 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 159, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
.... As it is obvious that if the research doesnt have any contributions to the society, ...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 368, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...me chance to fail to reach the request. Thats why I hold the view that disagrees with...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 170, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'factor'?
Suggestion: factor
...t has consequence must be a significant factors, because it determines whether it is ef...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 235, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
...mines whether it is efficient to patron a research. However, there are other important asp...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 151, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'scientific research'.
Suggestion: scientific research
.... It is widely accepted that conducting a scientific research includes may steps such as writing the ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 400, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
...teps. For instance, the Edison has made hundred times of failure before he finally inve...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 443, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'invents'.
Suggestion: invents
...dred times of failure before he finally invent the electric light. In that case, it is...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 527, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
...is nearly impossible to predict whether a research has good or bad result before it is don...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 226, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'flourishing research'.
Suggestion: flourishing research
... If he or she has wrong analysis toward a flourishing research? For another, some people will directly...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 355, Rule ID: FROM_FORM[4]
Message: Did you mean 'from'?
Suggestion: from
... for the hope that they want more money form the government, which will lead to part...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, for one thing
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1826.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 365.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00273972603 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82076848519 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509589041096 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4919605441 60.3974514979 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.3 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.21951772744 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 5.13820224719 234% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175898595755 0.243740707755 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510035825183 0.0831039109588 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519767533935 0.0758088955206 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0867173817928 0.150359130593 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547090251374 0.0667264976115 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.