There is no doubt that the authorities should sanction policy regards to investing in research project. First of all, there are some assignments do not clear on spending money. In simple terms, these plans expend money for unrelated business such as buying unimportant or high-price equipment. Moreover, works do not care about the expense or the plan. It leads the project is delayed and the cost increases. Thus, the government has to apply the policy to ensure the investment is used reasonably.
We should acknowledge that not all scientific research is used for the advancement of society. First and foremost, projects register to develop products which were performed by other teams. For more details, these plans build a prototype, but it was published and the new team does not confirm the proposed result will be better than the forerunner. Apart from it, the research can negatively affect the environment. It is evident that beside the main product, work also creates a large quantity of subproducts that affect the ecosystem such as the plastic, CO2,… and the meaning of the result is not high when compared to biosphere impacts. Therefore, the defender should release rules so as to control the scientific plans.
- College students should base their choice of field of study on the availability of jobs in that field 50
- As humans rely more on technology the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate 58
- In surveys Mason City residents rank water sports swimming boating and fishing among their favorite recreational activities The Mason River flowing through the city is rarely used for these pursuits however and the city park department devotes little of i 55
- Governments should place few if any restrictions on scientific research and development 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 565, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...e ecosystem such as the plastic, CO2,… and the meaning of the result is not high w...
^^^
Line 3, column 688, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...fore, the defender should release rules so as to control the scientific plans. In the l...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, apart from, as to, no doubt, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 58.6224719101 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 2235.4752809 67% => OK
No of words: 297.0 442.535393258 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06060606061 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7776859489 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569023569024 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 704.065955056 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.4733797674 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9375 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5625 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 5.21951772744 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220210839806 0.243740707755 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663198592341 0.0831039109588 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762995792687 0.0758088955206 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13383578925 0.150359130593 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379281212316 0.0667264976115 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.