The prompt claims that we can usually learn much more from like-minded people those whose views contradict our own because disagreement can cause tension, demotivation and impede learning. The given topic is highly contentious because disparate people may have different supports and opinions on the given topic. I am both agree and disagree with the given topic that we can usually learn much more from people whose views we share than from those whose views contradict our own. There are three reasons and examples supporting my position are presented in the following paragraphs.
Firstly, the quote by Thomas Jefferson, "The care of human life and happiness, not a destruction, is the first and only object of good government". The government plays the most important role in every country. The government must praise good work on scientific research. For instance, Frank Wittle, a Royal Air Force, wanted to develop a Turbo engine but his idea was rejected by a British Air Force. After that, he had to rise the fund and finally, he invented the turbo engine. Hence, this proved that government should not restrict scientific research.
Furthermore, scientific research plays an important role in the development of medicine of any disease. Any medicine have both positive and negative effect which can find out from the reasearch. For instance, in the case of Corona Virus which is spread all around the world, around 70 lakh people died. If every country's government could be focused on inventing the vaccine of Corona Virus small amount of people would have died. Hence, the government focuses on scientific research.
However, every time scientific research is not good. In many countries whose are no restrictions on scientific research that may invent nuclear bombs. in addition, those nuclear bomb has capacity to produce a huge amount of electrical energy, that may damage the whole city in a second. For example, In 1945, an America B-29 bomber drop an automatic bomb on the Japanese city Hiroshima and Nagasaki. The bomb wiped out 90% of the city and killed around 129,000 and 226,000 people in Hiroshima and Nagasaki respectively. Hence the government should be restricted on scientific research.
In summary, scientific research has both advantages and disadvantages. In some fields, scientific research is crucial however, in some cases scientific research is dangerous which are presented with reasons and examples supporting the Frank Wittle, Covid-19, and Hiroshima and Nagasaki nuclear explosion in the above paragraphs.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 118, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...f medicine of any disease. Any medicine have both positive and negative effect which...
^^^^
Line 5, column 304, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... the world, around 70 lakh people died. If every countrys government could be focu...
^^
Line 7, column 152, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...research that may invent nuclear bombs. in addition, those nuclear bomb has capaci...
^^
Line 7, column 521, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...in Hiroshima and Nagasaki respectively. Hence the government should be restricted on ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, second, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in summary, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2160.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 405.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78445179032 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523456790123 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 662.4 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.7836175073 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9130434783 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6086956522 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30434782609 5.21951772744 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 5.13820224719 272% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297555953621 0.243740707755 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110545689902 0.0831039109588 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137229932843 0.0758088955206 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165706076409 0.150359130593 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.086309823669 0.0667264976115 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 118, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...f medicine of any disease. Any medicine have both positive and negative effect which...
^^^^
Line 5, column 304, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... the world, around 70 lakh people died. If every countrys government could be focu...
^^
Line 7, column 152, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...research that may invent nuclear bombs. in addition, those nuclear bomb has capaci...
^^
Line 7, column 521, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...in Hiroshima and Nagasaki respectively. Hence the government should be restricted on ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, second, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in summary, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2160.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 405.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78445179032 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523456790123 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 662.4 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.7836175073 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9130434783 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6086956522 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30434782609 5.21951772744 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 5.13820224719 272% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297555953621 0.243740707755 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110545689902 0.0831039109588 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137229932843 0.0758088955206 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165706076409 0.150359130593 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.086309823669 0.0667264976115 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.