Our world is developing day-by-day and within the path of development we have contribution of various great individuals. Greatness is a result of living a remarkable journey in life. Getting success and achieving your goals which can be represented as an inspiration, motivation and paradigm for others is the definition of greatness. In our daily life, we tend to take motivation from people who have already achieved the same goals, or the ones who have a path with incredibly great success factor. The prompt presented here claims that the greatness of individuals can be decided only by those who live after them, not by their contemporaries. I have mostly-disagreeing opinion on the statement and I believe the greatness ones defined in an era, lasts endlessly along with the learnings and the philosophies defined. Our history does have many such great individuals whom greatness is still laudable but our present also have countless great personalities who are still on their incredulous journey.
Considering examples from our past, we have great writers like William Shakespeare, whose writings are world famous and one of its kind. Great scientists like Issac Newton, Albert Einstein, etc, whose philosophy and inventions were marvelous and has opened long continuing path of further discoveries and inventions. Mathematicians like Ramanujan, Alen Turing, Aryabhata have gifted the world some great theories whose journey is not ending anywhere soon. All these celebrities had proved themselves in their livelihood and has been appreciated, applauded and felicitated with respectful awards by some reputed organizations. Their greatness was defined at that time and was been accepted and approbated by their contemporaries. Many theories and philosophies presented by their peers were derived, inspired or emulated from the work of these great individuals. Therefore, the greatness of these connoisseurs was decided and accepted at their present and continuing till today.
With reference to our current world, we have great individuals like Sundar Pichai, Elon Musk, Ratan Tata, Mark Zukerberg, Toto Wolff, etc. One can count a big difference between the world we had 50-100 years ago and today and the distinction is being caused/led by various of these such personalities. The world right now is witnessing the change, development, innovations, and technological advancements within our living, standards and surroundings. These revolutions are the result of the greatness of the leaders who are sitting at the pinnacle of their fields and driving the new world. Since this world is producing new leaders every day, the competitors of them fighting their way pass and writing their own greatness story.
Claims of today may possibly be a false tomorrow. The greatness may have downfall. But one’s the greatness is defined, it last endlessly. If not as inspiration, then as a lesson. Within a life, one should not only blindly follow a success story but also need to learn failures. Greatness can also be presented by a determination of finding 100 ways not to succeed and finally one way to do. It’s the understanding, acceptance and inheritance that define greatness and it is irrespective of chronology of the event.
- The greatness of individuals can be decided only by those who live after them not by their contemporaries 83
- We can usually learn much more from people whose views we share than from people whoseviews contradict our own 58
- True success can be measured primarily in terms of the goals one sets for oneself 50
- Government should offer college and university education free of charge to all students Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take In develop 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 671, Rule ID: WAS_BEEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'was' or 'has been'?
Suggestion: was; has been
... greatness was defined at that time and was been accepted and approbated by their contem...
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Line 4, column 17, Rule ID: MIGHT_PERHAPS[1]
Message: Use simply 'may', 'possibly'.
Suggestion: may; possibly
... own greatness story. Claims of today may possibly be a false tomorrow. The greatness may ...
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Line 4, column 17, Rule ID: MAY_COULD_POSSIBLY[1]
Message: Use simply 'may'.
Suggestion: may
... own greatness story. Claims of today may possibly be a false tomorrow. The greatness may ...
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Line 4, column 123, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lasts'?
Suggestion: lasts
... But one’s the greatness is defined, it last endlessly. If not as inspiration, then ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, may, so, still, then, therefore, with reference to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 30.0 14.8657303371 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2730.0 2235.4752809 122% => OK
No of words: 509.0 442.535393258 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36345776031 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74984508646 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10017778835 2.79657885939 111% => OK
Unique words: 268.0 215.323595506 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52652259332 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 830.7 704.065955056 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.9283323223 60.3974514979 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5769230769 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84615384615 5.21951772744 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331788364157 0.243740707755 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0954634225723 0.0831039109588 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125895170993 0.0758088955206 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198308269152 0.150359130593 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0880031822179 0.0667264976115 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 137.0 100.480337079 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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