The human mind will always be superior to machines because machines are only tools of human minds.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Machines are the creation of human mind's and have played an an important part in transforming the society. Machines have made our lives simpler on many fronts of life. However, I agree that the human mind, the creator of these machines wil always be superior to machines.
Humans have always used their intelligence and creativity to invent things which would make their lives easier. Humans actively engage in community discussions to talk discursively about engaging topics so that they can gain new perspectives and ideas. Machines cannot talk within themselves, neither socialise which is a crucial part required to build things. Therefore, humans use machines as tools and not the reverse. Machines lack intelligence, sense of emotion to perform any given task on their own. Machines are automated to do things but they actively cannot perform any function without human intervention. For example, our computers do not detect any viruses on their own, they do have security protocols installed yet need human interaction to identify those viruses and safely remove them from they system. This delineates the fact that, although the machines can understand the baneful things, they themselves do nothing about it.
However, the reason human's invented machines was to help increase their work productivity and automate things so that the work efficacy remains high without getting enervated. People are inclined to work on a certain project for hours but they tend to get languid and torpor by the end of the day as the relentless efforts start rendering them sluggish. Here machines supersede the humans and can keep working twenty four hours without losing their temperament. Machines do not get stressed and their biggest disadvantage of not feeling any emotions, grants them an enormous advantage. Thus, machines are an effective tool to help solve problems. All these problems, which machines are intended to solve are discovered by humans. So humans are the ones who devise machines to solve their own problems, rendering machines nothing more than just tools.
Therefore, machines cannot surpass human's and will remain subjugated to human's will.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion: an; an
...creation of human minds and have played an an important part in transforming the soci...
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...persede the humans and can keep working twenty four hours without losing their temperament....
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...chines nothing more than just tools. Therefore, machines cannot surpass human...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, thus, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1829.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 342.0 442.535393258 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34795321637 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61751439761 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570175438596 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.4995593024 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2631578947 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.21951772744 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257377826876 0.243740707755 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0965577738085 0.0831039109588 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631804157789 0.0758088955206 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187323378299 0.150359130593 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036393107402 0.0667264976115 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.