If a goal is worthy, then any means taken to attain it is justifiable.
The statement claims that if a goal is worthy, important, then any means taken to attain goal is justifiable.
In some situation I agree with this statement because in our society goal is more important than how it achieve.
Whenever people achieve their goals then none of us are interested in how they achieve it, how much time he gives for it, by whom he reach that stage.
Society always remember people who doing something worthy for society even if their ways are not suitable but it give some benefit to society.
First of all, I agree with that goals are necessary for our growth and development.
Goals make us more attentive because until we did not achieve goal, we did not sit silently.
We do more hard work and give more concentration of our goal until we do not reach to our goal.
But even after doing these type of afford, some people cannot get their goal.
Then they take some shortcut or some other way to reach their goals and they also achieve their goal.
But for achieve it, they do something which is not good for them and also for society. At that time it is unjustifiable.
The possibility of it in our society is much more.
People do anything to achieve their goal even if it has deleterious effect on society.
At that time goals are not justifiable. For example if I want to achieve the 1st rank in my college, then I make plan to steal the exam paper and after doing this, even if, I get 1st rank in my college, it is not justifiable.
For achieve 1st rank, it must require to study more, not doing this type of activity.
Always people want to become millionaire, then it does not mean that he doing anything to achieve it. If he rob the bank, kidnaping the children, murder then it is not justifiable.
In political, leaders do everything to achieve the high post and in this cases it is also not justifiable.
In some situation, it is require to achieve goal in any circumstance.
For example, goal of father of any son is that his son become more valuable in society.
For that, if father take any strict steps then, it is justifiable.
At that time sons think that their father is not good and do not love him
But when some time went and they reach at some point which realise them why father take that type of steps.
In conclusion, I agree that goals are worthy and always people do everything to reach their goal but not take several steps which are not suitable.
When any situation happened and it is required to take several step, then it is justifiable.
So, whichever the steps are taken to achieve the goal are justifiable or not justifiable, it depend on situation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 105, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'achieves'?
Suggestion: achieves
...iety goal is more important than how it achieve. Whenever people achieve their goals t...
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Line 3, column 134, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'reaches'.
Suggestion: reaches
...w much time he gives for it, by whom he reach that stage. Society always remember pe...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 114, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'gives'?
Suggestion: gives
...n if their ways are not suitable but it give some benefit to society. First of ...
^^^^
Line 18, column 39, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'studying'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: studying
... For achieve 1st rank, it must require to study more, not doing this type of activity. ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 19, column 73, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[6]
Message: 'He' in subjunctive clause must be used base form of the verb: 'do'.
Suggestion: do
...lionaire, then it does not mean that he doing anything to achieve it. If he rob the b...
^^^^^
Line 19, column 108, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'robs'.
Suggestion: robs
... he doing anything to achieve it. If he rob the bank, kidnaping the children, murde...
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Line 20, column 69, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...rything to achieve the high post and in this cases it is also not justifiable. ...
^^^^
Line 23, column 26, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'required'.
Suggestion: required
...tifiable. In some situation, it is require to achieve goal in any circumstance. F...
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Line 23, column 34, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'achieving'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: achieving
.... In some situation, it is require to achieve goal in any circumstance. For example,...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 30, column 56, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun step seems to be countable; consider using: 'several steps'.
Suggestion: several steps
...ion happened and it is required to take several step, then it is justifiable. So, whichever...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 31, column 94, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'depends'?
Suggestion: depends
... are justifiable or not justifiable, it depend on situation.
^^^^^^
Line 31, column 114, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ot justifiable, it depend on situation.
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, for example, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 76.0 33.0505617978 230% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2178.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 477.0 442.535393258 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56603773585 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67336384929 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46017999691 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.373165618449 0.4932671777 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 681.3 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.740449438202 270% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1470769435 60.3974514979 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.7692307692 118.986275619 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3461538462 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.76923076923 5.21951772744 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 24.0 4.97078651685 483% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306402014243 0.243740707755 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112577002589 0.0831039109588 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.149048076626 0.0758088955206 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111896078956 0.150359130593 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.153636967298 0.0667264976115 230% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 14.1392134831 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 48.8420337079 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 12.1743820225 65% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 12.1639044944 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.25 8.38706741573 75% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 100.480337079 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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