If a goal is worthy, then any means taken to attain it are justifiable.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position
Having a set of goals and aims in life gives people a sense of direction in life. Working towards the goal, makes people more hardworking. And accordingly the prompt suggests that if people feel their goals are worth a lot , they should adopt any means to achieve it anyhow. In my opinion , I mostly disagree with this statement for two reasons.
To begin, persistence and determination is one of the good qualities in a person that will help them reach their aim in life more smoothly. But one should learn to give up a goal when it becomes almost unachievable. If should welcome flexibility along with persistence in their life. For instance, a student who wants to get into Harvard university failed to get admission after trying for his fourth time. He should be able to understand that at this point , trying again will be futile but continuing to try will only waste his years in life that he can can devote towards another goal in his life. This example clearly demonstrated that persisting tirelessly even when they are bound to fail will bring them no good, so one should know when to abandon a specific goal and adapt with then new situations in a flexible manner. Persistence is good but attaining flexibility brings further successes.
Secondly, it is often seen that people when they fail in achieving their specific target often adopts immoral ways to attain his goal. Giving up moral principles for attaining a goal is certainly not beneficial than holding on to the target. Moreover, adopting unethical ways to achieve something brings conflict not in life , but also in in one's soul. For instance, Hitler had a specific goal in his mind and he adopted any means that he could think of to achieve it, no matter how much destruction he is bringing on to the world. Is it really worth it to give up morals to attain a goal? -such a question is inevitable in these situations. This example specifically manifest that people should work for their goals but their persistence should be restrained within some principles. Otherwise , it will only bring chaos rather than tranquility.
Lastly, I do concede that if someone sets a goal for himself, he should exhaust through all possibilities to attain the goal but only in a principled manner. Persistence is necessary in life, otherwise people will only be come more lethargic. A person should be determined towards achieving their target but in the process , he should not lose his soul. What good is a success if it brings only chaos and turbulence?
In conclusion, working towards a goal gives people a sense of life, a reason to wake up everyday and work towards something. But no goal should be held on for too long even after trying and exhausting through all possibilities, otherwise one might get stuck at a certain point in his life. Knowing when to relinquish is a very important skill in one's life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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...eans to achieve it anyhow. In my opinion , I mostly disagree with this statement f...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...al when it becomes almost unachievable. If should welcome flexibility along with p...
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Suggestion: ,
...be able to understand that at this point , trying again will be futile but contin...
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Suggestion:
... able to understand that at this point , trying again will be futile but continui...
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...ll only waste his years in life that he can can devote towards another goal in his life...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a flexible manner" with adverb for "flexible"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...goal and adapt with then new situations in a flexible manner. Persistence is good but attaining flex...
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...ve something brings conflict not in life , but also in in ones soul. For instance,...
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...rained within some principles. Otherwise , it will only bring chaos rather than tr...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a principled manner" with adverb for "principled"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ssibilities to attain the goal but only in a principled manner. Persistence is necessary in life, othe...
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Suggestion: ,
...chieving their target but in the process , he should not lose his soul. What good ...
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...if it brings only chaos and turbulence? In conclusion, working towards a goal gi...
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
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...le a sense of life, a reason to wake up everyday and work towards something. But no goal...
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...relinquish is a very important skill in ones life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, if, lastly, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 12.4196629213 169% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 33.0505617978 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2380.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 496.0 442.535393258 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79838709677 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71922212354 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69703166057 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 215.323595506 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.469758064516 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 729.9 704.065955056 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.8898526765 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5384615385 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0769230769 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76923076923 5.21951772744 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0917180364037 0.243740707755 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0322118518376 0.0831039109588 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0296777974623 0.0758088955206 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0643373935753 0.150359130593 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261336684372 0.0667264976115 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.