Important truths begin as outrageous, or at least uncomfortable, attacks upon the accepted wisdom of the time.
this is a proven fact that truth is the initial stage of progress. however, it is also believed that truth always starts away from the traditions and conventions. Therefore, people consider truths as attacks upon their beliefs, which people are following from ages. truth also means some new facts that are unknown to us. people do not want to deviate from the facts, which they have learnt from their ancestors, and it is true to say that shedding ones dogmas is often difficult. they feel that it is an attack on their wisdom.
if we look at the history of the world, we will find many examples where truth has generated commotions in the society. different people have different views about the existence of God, life after death and origin of earth etc. For example, people took a long time to accept that the earth is round. Religious leaders and clergymen opposed this idea as it was against what they were teaching. similarly, when Polish astronomer, Copernicus discovered that the earth goes round the sun and not vice versa, he was opposed by churches for many years. In fact he and his supporters were convicted for their ideas. hence, it is very difficult to change the traditions that are followed by majority of people.
similarly, when Darwin gave the theory of evolution, and challenged the old ideology, he was resisted by public. Nobody was ready to believe that apes were the ancestors of humankind. however, it is important to accept truths, otherwise it would hinder the growth of mankind. it is important for us to accept new ideas so as to bring out reforms in society and thus adopt new ideologies. it would open doors for various kinds of development. one should not blindly accept and follow old ideas or new truths. there should be enough scientific approach and explanations for everything.
however, there might be different reasons for this kind of uncomfortable reactions against truth. The first and the most responsible reason is the human nature. most people will not prefer to change their ways of life and thinking, as it is accepted and prevalent from time unknown. they believe in what they are doing and experiencing for their whole life. The second factor is that truths often challenge the other persons authority. In order to save their status and honor, authoritarians oppose new ideas and truths. In getting their own way, they provoke the public. Sometimes these reactions go violent also.
however, these days, people are becoming more open minded. they are ready to accept new ideas. Our societies all over the world are getting more flexible and open to new truths. hence, new ideas and truths are accepted peacefully and there are no violent commotions.
The conclusion is that important truths, which challenge the proven wisdom, always, face oppression. however, if these truths hold any ground, then these are accepted over a period of time after facing trials.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, look, second, similarly, so, then, therefore, thus, as to, for example, in fact, kind of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 19.5258426966 169% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 33.0505617978 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2457.0 2235.4752809 110% => OK
No of words: 491.0 442.535393258 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00407331976 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70728369723 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49441700968 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 215.323595506 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513238289206 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 739.8 704.065955056 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 6.24550561798 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 34.0 20.2370786517 168% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.6892430078 60.3974514979 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.2647058824 118.986275619 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4411764706 23.4991977007 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.91176470588 5.21951772744 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 7.80617977528 333% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 10.2758426966 204% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169988567036 0.243740707755 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0419382674491 0.0831039109588 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467418036619 0.0758088955206 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0929918675303 0.150359130593 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375037988999 0.0667264976115 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 14.1392134831 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 48.8420337079 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 12.1743820225 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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