The increasingly rapid pace of life today causes more problems than it solves.
In olden days, people dwelled in villages and lead a peaceful life. there was no competition or challenges to be faced by an individual and hence no worries regarding the future or money. Similarly, women were kept inside the homes and took care of the everyday household chores together with husband and children. life was simple without the rush to complete or compete for anything. Nevertheless, modern age witnesses a change in trend due to the shift of professions and the ladies going out to study and pursue a career. Thus, life has become a race, and this continues from dawn to dusk. As a result of such issues humans are aggravated with problems beyond measure which is detailed in the following paragraphs.
Firstly, in a house, both men and women go for work. Early mornings in those type of houses will equal a thriller combined with an action-packed movie. The child, not being cared by the parents, the father searching for his things to get ready for office and the mother busy cooking food in turn hustling and bustling leaving for her job. such scenario is commonplace in most of the 20th century homes. due to this, there is a great impact on the family life. Small kids get scarce attention and tend to grow with bad behaviors and mannerisms irrelevant to their ancestors and tend to commit crimes contrary to their counterpart whose mother is a home maker.
Secondly, in the busy schedule, most of them forget to have breakfast which could lead to health-related problems. work stress and pressure from the job adds to the complications. Children’s are exposed to junk food as working parents don’t even find time to provide adequate nutrition to babies. To avoid unnecessary sick leave, many of them take medications on their own and this is done occasionally leading to major defects over a passage of time. Instead of taking rest at home, they administer pills which later turns out to be futile decreasing the efficiency of body’s immune system.
Furthermore, since everything happens so fast, employees using the different modes of transport don’t foresee the danger that lie ahead of them. men and youngsters are seen travelling in the steps of buses or trains as they cannot wait for the next vehicle. In this fast-paced world, work becomes the priority rather than the safety of an individual. this has led to the death of myriad number of passengers.
However, with this tight schedule, people work to yield fruitful results. Advancements in the field of science and technology was possible because of such sacrifices. Luxury and comfort have become common in the life of all. but one misses time spent to admire the scenic beauty of the villages or relish the home cooked food of their parents and the love and care rendered by grandparents.
In a nutshell, the above facts could be reiterated that, even though the world is moving at a great speed providing the necessities to lead a good life, with the passage of time, one will realize that all of this has been got at the cost of health and the invaluable time that could have been spent with family members. Towards the end, the universe will be filled with robots who may overtake human beings but cannot give back the emotion or bonding of men.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, nevertheless, regarding, second, secondly, similarly, so, thus, well, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 14.8657303371 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 91.0 58.6224719101 155% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2720.0 2235.4752809 122% => OK
No of words: 558.0 442.535393258 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87455197133 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.86024933743 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62469621149 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 326.0 215.323595506 151% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584229390681 0.4932671777 118% => OK
syllable_count: 831.6 704.065955056 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.8004024131 60.3974514979 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1428571429 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.21951772744 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0568018887664 0.243740707755 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0170725549575 0.0831039109588 21% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0291713889182 0.0758088955206 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0294970296115 0.150359130593 20% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0231901802397 0.0667264976115 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 134.0 100.480337079 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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