The increasingly rapid pace of life today causes more problems than it solves.
It's true that we are more involved with our work, and become more result-oriented. The prompt posit that our increased pace of life creating more problems than sovling it. I strongly agree with the author for the reasons I will mention in the essay.
To begin we become more lazy and result-oriented. We don't have time for the physical exercises, and the technology contributed significantly in our this laziness. For instance, now we don't have to cook our food or to go for shopping, instead we are ordering it online, and this is one of the main reason of our physical problems, such as obesity and heart related diseases. An American journal has predicted that in next 20 yrs around 30 precent of total world population would be obesies. This is an alarming prediction, since obesies is the root cause of many heart related diseases. The above example illustrated that we should spend some time for our physical fitness or we will be trouble in near future.
Secondly, because of increased pace of life, our relationship today are more transitory than before. We are spending less time with our family, friends and we don't have time for our own children. As a result of this, problem of anxieties and number of divorces had been increased many fold. Critic would argue that since with help of technology we can connect with our family and friends, but supporter of this claim would argue that since we are humans, and we like physical presence more than that of communication through audio and video calls.
Lastly, currently no job positions are secure, and there is always worry of losing job between a major corporate workers. Technology is changing day and night. People who has spend more than decade or two are more venerable to this change. Their positions are not safe and this is causing stress and anxiety to them. They are spending more time in company than with their family, and thus their social relationship are also getting effected.
In conclusion, our involving pace of life has created more problems than it solved, and this is because of we have to compete with others, and we don't have time for ourself and for our close one, and thus we are harming ourself and our relationships.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 54, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ecome more lazy and result-oriented. We dont have time for the physical exercises, a...
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Line 5, column 185, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...our this laziness. For instance, now we dont have to cook our food or to go for shop...
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Line 5, column 281, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d we are ordering it online, and this is one of the main reason of our physical p...
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Line 9, column 160, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ss time with our family, friends and we dont have time for our own children. As a re...
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Line 9, column 281, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun fold seems to be countable; consider using: 'many folds'.
Suggestion: many folds
...d number of divorces had been increased many fold. Critic would argue that since with hel...
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Line 13, column 114, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'worker'?
Suggestion: worker
...of losing job between a major corporate workers. Technology is changing day and night. ...
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Line 13, column 176, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
... changing day and night. People who has spend more than decade or two are more venera...
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Line 17, column 97, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_I[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'because we' instead.
Suggestion: because we
...re problems than it solved, and this is because of we have to compete with others, and we don...
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Line 17, column 147, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... we have to compete with others, and we dont have time for ourself and for our close...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 54.0 33.0505617978 163% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1843.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 382.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82460732984 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59041830373 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505235602094 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 10.0 1.77640449438 563% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7312296885 60.3974514979 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1052631579 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26315789474 5.21951772744 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19884296997 0.243740707755 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0818690795019 0.0831039109588 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113363761475 0.0758088955206 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142698580394 0.150359130593 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729757901121 0.0667264976115 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.1392134831 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.