The increasingly rapid pace of life today causes more problems than it solves.
With the pace that humanity is heading towards the future, it has become a burning question where this will end. It is not about the development that is being encountered, but the denial of consequences that leads to the question and deliberate concerns regarding the behavior and psychology of mankind. We certainly have advanced a lot - have a lot of technology at our disposal, are smarter than ever, studying in reputed universities learning and researching about the deeper and deeper concepts and phenomena that were once obscure, solving problems that have been hampering the growth of humans, and what not. Although, this development has solved a lot of problems prevailing since the early days of mankind, and continues to solve problems that we face every day, but it has given way to a lot of other problems that technology can not solve. The rapid pace of life has caused more problems than it solves.
Every one is busy with their own life and living today with the work one has to get done, the deadlines, the assignments, client engagements etc. We want to get one work done as quickly as possible, moving on to the next one, never taking a break and reflecting what the bigger picture is. With all these engagements, parents have no time for their children, children have no time for their parents. Everybody is leading a solitary life, unsympathetic to family and friends. This has caused a dramatic decline in family values and traditions.
With this increasing pace comes avarice, lust and the willingness to do anything to achieve what we desire. There is a lot of competition for everything - getting into the best school, then best college, then landing good jobs, so on and so forth - that has led people to be willing to employ any means to get the best for them. Some get it by working hard, others by malfeasance. Values and fair practices are put at stake to achieve what one wants. This has led to problems with people trusting each other, because no one knows what is fair and what is not. Those who are not that bright enough to get the best for them by hard work commit to malpractices to get what they want. They plan heists, burglaries, and all sorts of hacks. These practices engender rivalry and vindictive behavior, and thus crimes and murders. Aren’t all these problems the result of our own undoing?
Many people live stressful lives because of work pressure, peer pressure etc. This leads to several health problems - heart attacks, depression, nervous breakdowns and other conditions - that put their lives at risk and reduce the life expectancy. On one hand, we are trying to combat these diseases with advanced research and discoveries, and on the other hand, our lifestyle promotes the risk of such conditions happening to us. Doesn’t it look it there are more problems than we are trying to solve?
Technology and development have aimed at making life better and provide better living standards for humans, but our inveterate nature to get the best at any cost has caused a lot of problems that can not be solved, and have put our lives at risk and social obligations unfulfilled. This advancement has come with a huge price and has become cumbersome for mankind to deal with. It is very necessary to find ways to make our lives rich and better in terms of values and practices we follow to achieve something. Resorting to fair means and introspection can solve some of the problems we face in life and put humanity back on track for greater good.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'look', 'regarding', 'so', 'then', 'thus', 'as to', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.231343283582 0.240241500013 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.189552238806 0.157235817809 121% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0716417910448 0.0880659088768 81% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0373134328358 0.0497285424764 75% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0462686567164 0.0444667217837 104% => OK
Prepositions: 0.101492537313 0.12292977631 83% => OK
Participles: 0.065671641791 0.0406280797675 162% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.59938934472 2.79330140395 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0402985074627 0.030933414821 130% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0880597014925 0.0997080785238 88% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00597014925373 0.0249443105267 24% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0223880597015 0.0148568991511 151% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3505.0 2732.02544248 128% => OK
No of words: 609.0 452.878318584 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.75533661741 6.0361032391 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.96768813016 4.58838876751 108% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.308702791461 0.366273622748 84% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.229885057471 0.280924506359 82% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.174055829228 0.200843997647 87% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.103448275862 0.132149295362 78% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59938934472 2.79330140395 93% => OK
Unique words: 283.0 219.290929204 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.464696223317 0.48968727796 95% => OK
Word variations: 56.7898400646 55.4138127331 102% => OK
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6194690265 131% => OK
Sentence length: 22.5555555556 23.380412469 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.3346883334 59.4972553346 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.814814815 141.124799967 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5555555556 23.380412469 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.333333333333 0.674092028746 49% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.21349557522 38% => OK
Readability: 45.5440613027 51.4728631049 88% => OK
Elegance: 1.45901639344 1.64882698954 88% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225544543236 0.391690518653 58% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.108097416624 0.123202303941 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0829196860428 0.077325440228 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.472658011312 0.547984918172 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.162893862431 0.149214159877 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0946494637508 0.161403998019 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126618766189 0.0892212321368 142% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.356925491778 0.385218514788 93% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0519487868856 0.0692045440612 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154496412866 0.275328986314 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0892180623371 0.0653680567796 136% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.4325221239 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.30420353982 189% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 7.22455752212 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 9.0 3.66592920354 246% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 21.0 13.5995575221 154% => OK
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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