It is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
“A hero is someone who has given his or her life to something bigger than oneself “-Joseph Campbell
The world which we spectacular does not build in one day, rather it has been built with the contribution of people around the world whom we consider our role model or Hero .Without their immense hard work and their tremendous sufferings, we wouldn’t live a better world . It is stated above, that in society now a days it is impossible to live being a hero . In my opinion , I mostly disagree with the fact that it is no longer possible to be a hero now a days for three reasons.
Firstly , a hero is not someone who needs recognition. He doesnot work for fame or success or getting some wordly benefit . Not all the heroes which we see around us thrive for recognition. For example, Mother Teressa is the person who helped the needy people ,and serve them to give a better life .The way she helped and take care of them that later on people gave her the title “MOTHER”- the highest position of non paid job which cant be measure with money .And when she was doing that she did not expect to get a title “hero” rather she had done it because she really cared about human kind .So,not all the hero we see around us they need recognition at that time ,but eventually people will remember him or her for his novel work .
Furthermore ,what hero actually means ? does it mean bravery ? does it mean fame ?does it mean who will only live an austere life for the people ? Well a hero can be anyone from his or her perspective .For example ,a daughter”s true hero is her dad. Because from the birth of that daughter ,the dad is protecting him from the evil things of society , teaching her various things ,give her lessons about the outer world and so on . So , for that daughter,her father is a hero aka a role model .A father is a person who is best to her daughter no matter what he does for the society .So , it is obviously possible in our society to live as a hero maybe not to all the person ,but to his family and his friends.
Moreover ,Human being are rational. They cant do good things all the time . The persons whom we consider “hero” is not a also perfect human being. It is man who makes mistakes and obviously it should not be expected to be flawless as a human being . He or she may have some flaws that doesn’t mean the great deed which he have done becoming any less.It is said that “ Heroes Live Forever “ what that does exactly means ?For example , the famous scientist, Einstien is considered a hero in his scientific field but his personal life was pretty disaster . But that does not make his inventions any less.People still feel greatful towards his work.So heroes are not perfect human being but they live for their work in our life.
However,some people have some contradictions regarding the word “hero” . As they think they should be perfect human being too.But we should also keep in mind that they are also human being .Without the efforts of our heroes ,our society can never be shaped the way it is . And we should always feel gratitude towards their good deed .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, really, regarding, so, still, well, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 37.0 19.5258426966 189% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 25.0 11.3162921348 221% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 85.0 33.0505617978 257% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2607.0 2235.4752809 117% => OK
No of words: 567.0 442.535393258 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59788359788 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.87972968509 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59109603501 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 261.0 215.323595506 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.460317460317 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 797.4 704.065955056 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.77640449438 394% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 132.578442397 60.3974514979 220% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 118.5 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7727272727 23.4991977007 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36363636364 5.21951772744 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 65.0 7.80617977528 833% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178077807323 0.243740707755 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065100512511 0.0831039109588 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536217490823 0.0758088955206 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101318674969 0.150359130593 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500798144656 0.0667264976115 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 48.8420337079 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 12.1639044944 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.7820224719 153% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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