Claim: While boredom is often expressed with a sense of self-satisfaction, it should really be a source of embarrassment.
Reason: Boredom arises from a lack of imagination and self-motivation.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
In this world people have to do a plethora of tasks everyday for various reasons. Some people are so busy that they do not get time to breathe and some other people feel bored no matter what he or she does. It is stated that though boredom is often represented with a sense of self –satisfaction but it is basically should be the source of embarrassment .In my opinion I strongly agree with this for three reasons .
Firstly ,if a people are creative enough ,they never get adequate time to get bored. People only feel bored with a work or any task when they are bound to do that rather than they follow their own passion .If someone chooses his passion as his career ,in job field he will never face boredom. Because it is something which he loves to do and likes to be indulged in all the time.For example, Mark Zuckerberg was a college dropout as he chose his passion and founded Facebook to socialize with his friends. As he chose what he loved to do that time he has never faced failure in his life in future. As a result he has become one of the youngest rich person in the whole world at an early age. If he used to continue what he was studying in college, he would never become that much successful. It is his creativity which has enhanced his career and never let him fall in the trap of boredom.
Furthermore , a desire to do something in life and to achieve something which is extraordinary,are the sources which make people to keep going. The person who are ambitious and motivated enough never stop and waste their time giving the excuses of boredom. Like APJ Abdul Kalam mentioned ‘Dream is not which we watch in sleep ,it is something which keeps someone awake’ .So a motivated person always try to acquire to do something in life.And he would never get a chance to be bored with his life .Abdul Kalam himself never had given up when he first didn’t get the chance as a fighter pilot.Rather later on he became interested in research and put all his effort on that. For this reason he is now known as the MISSILE man in India.
Moreover ,when people follow his own passion and desires, it never stops him to be bored with the work .As in his head he always want to achieve that goal by any means which do not give him any chance to be bored .For example , an animation creator can open his own startup leaving the arduous engineering projects if he is motivated and passionate enough to pursue his career as an animator .It is such a creative sector where people never feel bored of their work and rather the more imaginative he will be the better it will be for his career.
However,there are some contradictions regarding this matter. Some people believe when there is self satisfaction and work satisfaction for which they can feel bored. It is their liability and not a matter of embarrassment at all. As it indicates that they are content enough. But youth is the best time when people can make use the best of their life .Giving the excuses of boredom ,they are depriving themselves from being the most successful one. In their old age if he look back and feel regret ,boredom and wasting time will be the only factor to get blame for .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, for example, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 19.5258426966 169% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 23.0 11.3162921348 203% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 77.0 33.0505617978 233% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2614.0 2235.4752809 117% => OK
No of words: 580.0 442.535393258 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50689655172 5.05705443957 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.90746259869 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48527222653 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 267.0 215.323595506 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.460344827586 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 834.3 704.065955056 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.10617977528 290% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 121.159833342 60.3974514979 201% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 124.476190476 118.986275619 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.619047619 23.4991977007 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 5.21951772744 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 44.0 7.80617977528 564% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123667649131 0.243740707755 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449193003453 0.0831039109588 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055995213963 0.0758088955206 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0876874930387 0.150359130593 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296739801872 0.0667264976115 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 48.8420337079 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 12.1639044944 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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