It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are generated and preserved.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Cultural traditions are major elements that represent a nation and the behavior of its citizens. And, there is no such country which lacks any cultural traits. However, I strongly disagree with the prompt that the cities are the sole producer or preserver of the cultural traditions of a nation rather I believe that any particular place is not the main or most important place for generating culture and tradition, but it is the people and their practice of such tradition that is responsible for a prolonged cultural trait.
Admittedly, because of globalization and rapid industrialization, urbanization is now at its best speed. Therefore, most the countries are now accommodating a number of cities that fuels their development, and for better fortune, more and more people are now coming to cities and towns. As a result, the portion of the village or rural population is declining at great speed. However, that does not indicate that the cities are the powerhouse of the culture of a nation. Because culture is not something that can be made within a short time, rather its needs, sometimes, more than hundreds of years to shape certain traditions and norms for a particular nation. Therefore, it would not be wise to judge the culture of a nation by only observing the city population for two reasons.
First of all, the residents of the cities are there for a short time, compared to the time required to generate a certain culture. Moreover, virtually there are no boundaries among the nations because of the internet, mobile phones, televisions etc. As a result of that, cultures are now merging, and the people of the city are more vulnerable to foreign cultures as they are the primary consumer of the benefits of globalization. Hence, it is very likely that the practice they are doing is not native to that nation, instead, it might be foreign. Therefore, they are actually mimicking foreign culture rather than generating a new one.
Secondly, as people move to the cities they are going to enjoy certain amenities and use products that are not representative of their own culture. For example, in Bangladesh, the indigenous dress or cloth for men and women are Panjabi and Sharee respectively. When they move to cities, they usually start to wear pants, shirts etc., which are actually very different from their local dresses. And, if more and more people are going to do the same, and people from the village also started to follow the city residents, which is now evident, the traditions of local dresses will demise. Therefore, it is necessary to practice the culture.
Finally, it can be said that neither the village nor the city is primarily responsible for creating or preserving cultural traditions, rather it is the use of indigenous goods or practice of certain social norms by the people that are responsible for generating and preserving the cultural traits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 35.0 19.5258426966 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2410.0 2235.4752809 108% => OK
No of words: 483.0 442.535393258 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98964803313 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68799114503 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81026444586 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.43685300207 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 779.4 704.065955056 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.4219557658 60.3974514979 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.5 118.986275619 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.15 23.4991977007 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9 5.21951772744 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220343840165 0.243740707755 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680157739472 0.0831039109588 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556551876406 0.0758088955206 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143261354309 0.150359130593 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589356716435 0.0667264976115 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.