Laws should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the
statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting
your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and
explain how these considerations shape your position.
Laws are the most significant standard for a country to decide whether the country will be flourished or decayed. Authorities who make laws need to consider deliberately in different time, place, and circumstances to enable laws are partial to all citizens.
Regarding laws should be changed over time, the discrepancy between crimes from the past and now could be the clue to indicate that laws need to be flexible. The outdated laws would not be able to address issues come along with the advance of new technology. For example, cyber-crime has been one of the most severe issues happen in today’s world that hackers are everywhere, they can intrude in any computers or even authorities’ computers to get the information they want. And some companies would even hire these hackers to steal secret messages from their competitors to exceed them. In this case, as the new issues are being introduced, laws to deal with these issues should enhance as well to make sure these hackers are getting arrested and let the society run well.
Besides, laws’ flexibility is necessary when considering different regions. Different regions contain different cultures and official holidays, laws have to obey local people’s conventions to give them rights. For example, if a state has more Jewish citizens, the state’s law towards the holidays should be equal to their traditions, such as giving holidays for them to have religious’ rituals. But this holiday might not be the law of other states. Also, about the traffic problems in New York, the law might be to control the traffic jams happen in the city, such as to restrict cars flow every day by their plate number. However, other cities might not carry out the same law. Therefore, the law should be different depending on different situations in regions.
Another important factor that laws need to base on is about the circumstances, which means not every criminal could be treated as the same. According to the age of criminals and the ponderance of the case, different laws could be implemented. For example, teenagers who are malfeasance, such as stealing or fighting with others need to have rehabilitation, because they are not mature enough to regret their misbehavior. It’s inappropriate to put them in jail for a long time, which would impact their whole life in such a young age. However, it is possible to put adults in jail if he murdered someone because this crime has affected the discipline of the society, his action needs to be confined to make citizens live in a safe society. Accordingly, it’s vital for laws to change depending on different circumstances.
All in all, making effective laws is necessary for a country to develop because it gives citizens’ rights and equality so that they feel comfortable and safe to live here. Thus, laws should keep changing with different time, place, and circumstances so that they can run the society better.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 297, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o that they can run the society better.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, besides, but, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 12.4196629213 169% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 58.6224719101 111% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2485.0 2235.4752809 111% => OK
No of words: 486.0 442.535393258 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11316872428 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69525374022 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88396415264 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 215.323595506 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512345679012 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 775.8 704.065955056 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3199283583 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.954545455 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0909090909 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04545454545 5.21951772744 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148706437074 0.243740707755 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541278583681 0.0831039109588 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0281716550173 0.0758088955206 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.089756260725 0.150359130593 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224347757621 0.0667264976115 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 14.1392134831 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 100.480337079 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.