Leading a people by a people is not a things that we saw in todays worlds, it was happenings from the history and will be continued forever. Leaders leads the people into the certain things but not in all things. A person becomes leader, if he had achieved something in his life that make him/her superior then others. This given prompts recommend that expectation and demand placed on the person make them leaders. In my opinion, I strongly disagree the given prompts because of the below two reasons.
Firstly, placing demand on someone doesn't make a person leader if that person can not do well on that particular hope and this leads to failure of his/her career rather than making his/her to a leader. Person have their personal view in somethings and approach of doing some better things for the achievement. Demands make a person to perform a particular task rather than make them a leader. Lets take an example, a civil engineer works in a construction company and his demanded task is to perform a civil works in the benefit of the person and his own company. He might have done all the things related to his jobs with a passion and great interest but sometimes in the field of the works , he might have strife with persons due to certain disagreement and all people treat him like a fraud and bad person. Performing task on somethings does not certainly mean that this demands make a leader.
Secondly, Political leaders are the leaders that leads the nation future and demands that are placed on them make them a good leader if their performance are good and if their work is not effective than that decrease the value of the person resulting them into the bad ones. For an instance a leader called as Ravi lamichhane from the RSP party in nepal. His reputation is came from the media background and he helps in a lot of social works that leads to increase in the people hope for developing the nation and all people demanded him to became a leader but later on all realizes that he was an devorced person and have low morals value and all treat him like bad one. So, demands on a person not make a leader if a person had no moral values
In conclusion, dependings upon the about fact I strongly disagree the above prompt.
- People s behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take In developing and supporting 50
- Leaders are created by the demands that are placed on them Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take In developing and supporting your position y 50
- The following is a letter that recently appeared in the Oak City Gazette a local newspaper The primary function of the Committee for a Better Oak City is to advise the city government on how to make the best use of the city s limited budget However at 74
- Scientists and other researchers should focus their research on areas that are likely to benefit the greatest number of people Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoni 50
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 37, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a thing' or simply 'things'?
Suggestion: a thing; things
Leading a people by a people is not a things that we saw in todays worlds, it was ha...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 36, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ns. Firstly, placing demand on someone doesnt make a person leader if that person can...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 393, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...ar task rather than make them a leader. Lets take an example, a civil engineer works...
^^^^
Line 2, column 508, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'work'?
Suggestion: work
...his demanded task is to perform a civil works in the benefit of the person and his ow...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 691, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... but sometimes in the field of the works , he might have strife with persons due t...
^^
Line 2, column 868, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... somethings does not certainly mean that this demands make a leader. Secondly, P...
^^
Line 3, column 251, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...crease the value of the person resulting them into the bad ones. For an instance ...
^^
Line 3, column 374, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'come'.
Suggestion: come
...e RSP party in nepal. His reputation is came from the media background and he helps ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 596, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...r but later on all realizes that he was an devorced person and have low morals va...
^^
Line 3, column 618, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lizes that he was an devorced person and have low morals value and all treat him ...
^^
Line 4, column 48, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lusion, dependings upon the about fact I strongly disagree the above prompt.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 33.0505617978 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1833.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 402.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55970149254 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40362513992 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.457711442786 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 570.6 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.9043257441 60.3974514979 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.2 118.986275619 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8 23.4991977007 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 5.21951772744 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102613404724 0.243740707755 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453284175705 0.0831039109588 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0270156499982 0.0758088955206 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0657225834105 0.150359130593 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284048537697 0.0667264976115 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 14.1392134831 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 48.8420337079 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 12.1639044944 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 100.480337079 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 37, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a thing' or simply 'things'?
Suggestion: a thing; things
Leading a people by a people is not a things that we saw in todays worlds, it was ha...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 36, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ns. Firstly, placing demand on someone doesnt make a person leader if that person can...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 393, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...ar task rather than make them a leader. Lets take an example, a civil engineer works...
^^^^
Line 2, column 508, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'work'?
Suggestion: work
...his demanded task is to perform a civil works in the benefit of the person and his ow...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 691, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... but sometimes in the field of the works , he might have strife with persons due t...
^^
Line 2, column 868, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... somethings does not certainly mean that this demands make a leader. Secondly, P...
^^
Line 3, column 251, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...crease the value of the person resulting them into the bad ones. For an instance ...
^^
Line 3, column 374, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'come'.
Suggestion: come
...e RSP party in nepal. His reputation is came from the media background and he helps ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 596, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...r but later on all realizes that he was an devorced person and have low morals va...
^^
Line 3, column 618, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lizes that he was an devorced person and have low morals value and all treat him ...
^^
Line 4, column 48, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lusion, dependings upon the about fact I strongly disagree the above prompt.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 33.0505617978 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1833.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 402.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55970149254 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40362513992 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.457711442786 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 570.6 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.9043257441 60.3974514979 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.2 118.986275619 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8 23.4991977007 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 5.21951772744 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102613404724 0.243740707755 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453284175705 0.0831039109588 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0270156499982 0.0758088955206 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0657225834105 0.150359130593 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284048537697 0.0667264976115 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 14.1392134831 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 48.8420337079 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 12.1639044944 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 100.480337079 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.