People have their own behavior and it is different from one to another. Person behavior is the things that identify the person probity and moral. The given prompts recommend that external factors is responsible for the chamgr in the behavior of a man or women. In my opinion, I strongly agree the given prompts because of mainly three reasons.
Person's behavior is changing along with time and situation and is changed due to the behavior of his/her friend circle. It is a key factor for changing the behavior of a men. Let take an example, My friend named as Ajay is very rude and not polite to other friends in the college and often get irritated by outside environment but during all college day all friend take him to outing in every week and his behavior is changing due to others attachment towards him and lately, he enjoy the company of others and becomes polite to the friends. So, friends circle play a role in changing the behavior of person.
Secondly, people becomes spendthrift if they have much money rather then become thrift. For an instance, a rich person buy car, bike and even clothes that are rich in price but a poor person always try to fulfil their want through small investment. A person known as Ratan Tata always travels through airplane from one place to another and spend a lot in his life but a simple living person does not able to do that. By above reason, a person behavior is shaped by money.
Lastly, Person habit is also changed by the situation is had faced during the lifetime. If a person came through a tough situation in a life then that person is likely to became a man who take a difficult situation very easily. For an example, a person fails in a gre exam likely to 4-5 times then according to the failure person than failing is life is so normal but a person who always get a high score in exam then that situation leds him to different situation and behavior of that person is changed due to his result. That's why various factors shape a person habit.
In conclusion, due to the various reasons described above in an essay, I strongly support the given prompt.
- People s behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take In developing and supporting 50
- Scientists and other researchers should focus their research on areas that are likely to benefit the greatest number of people Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoni 50
- The following is a letter that recently appeared in the Oak City Gazette a local newspaper The primary function of the Committee for a Better Oak City is to advise the city government on how to make the best use of the city s limited budget However at 74
- Leaders are created by the demands that are placed on them Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take In developing and supporting your position y 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 168, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a man' or simply 'men'?
Suggestion: a man; men
...key factor for changing the behavior of a men. Let take an example, My friend named a...
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Line 2, column 170, Rule ID: MAN_MEN[1]
Message: 'man' is the singular form of 'men'. Consider using 'man'?
Suggestion: man
...y factor for changing the behavior of a men. Let take an example, My friend named a...
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Line 2, column 479, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'enjoys'.
Suggestion: enjoys
...s attachment towards him and lately, he enjoy the company of others and becomes polit...
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Line 2, column 600, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... play a role in changing the behavior of person. Secondly, people becomes spendt...
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Line 3, column 69, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'? 'than' is used for comparisons, 'then' is an expression of time.
Suggestion: than
...ndthrift if they have much money rather then become thrift. For an instance, a rich ...
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Line 4, column 88, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ation is had faced during the lifetime. If a person came through a tough situation...
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Line 4, column 523, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...at person is changed due to his result. Thats why various factors shape a person habi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, then, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 12.4196629213 0% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1731.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 381.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54330708661 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36057978523 2.79657885939 84% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488188976378 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.0568682109 60.3974514979 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.823529412 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4117647059 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64705882353 5.21951772744 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.08805379196 0.243740707755 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0407527792481 0.0831039109588 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0336992412152 0.0758088955206 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0605607856025 0.150359130593 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340001783455 0.0667264976115 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 48.8420337079 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 12.1639044944 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 100.480337079 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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