The main benefit of the study of history is to dispel the illusion that people living now are significantly different from people who lived in earlier times.
From the dawn of human life, mankind is continuously evolving physically and mentally. The topic raises a controversial issue that whether the main advantage from learning
history is to remove the thinking that people are different in earlier times or not. Indisputably, some characters and habits are genetically adopted by people from their
ancetors. Nevertheless, human have evolved a lot with respect to ancient times. Thus, it is insignificant to compare people who are living now with the humans of ancient
times.
First of all, humans are the only people in the world who has the capability to think and then decide what to do. Due to their thinking, they are continuously evolving
themselves in every aspect of life. For example, people of Great Britain would like to wear formal clothing in their earlier times. But now a days, they are more interested in
adopting causual clothing. Furthermore, ancient people are the people who always keep their word whatever they say, but now instead, people are much involved in fake
promises which they would never been able to kept. Thus there is a huge difference in lifestyle of people in earlier times with respect to current world with respect to thinking.
History is the only subject which taught us about the ancient people and their lives. When we compare their lifestyle with ours, they were far more different from people living
now. People now a days are much more dependent on technology apart from earlier times. Technology has changed the view people use to think and live their life. For
instance, earlier people of 19th century would like to spend their time in listening music from radio, but now a days, people have ipods and smartphones with great noise
cancellation power. There are numerous apsects in which people differ from earlier times. All those lifestyle and cultures were only known by knowing their history.
Although there are vast number of advantages about learning history like it gives us a general idea about a nation and its culture, the main benefit is to know about people
living in hoary times so that we can compare themselves with current people. Furthermore, it reveals the names of some great people who have contributed a lot to their
nation. Like Mahatma Gandhi, a great Indian leader in the midst of 90's. He had overthrew a whole empire without even a little bit of violence. Moreover, The great leader
Abrahim Lincon was known as the most noble person in the history of America even after his involvement in the fierciest war America has even fought. These things are only
known after studying the history of a specific nation.
In conclusion, although there are other sources from which we get to know about the earlier times like the stories from our ancestors about lifestyle of people living in earlier
days, history taught us most about the lifestyle of people and how they've evolved from generation to generation. Furthermore, there are numerous advantages of knowing
the history like it gives us the general idea about the nation, its culture and various languages used in that nation, however, the main advantage of it is to teach us significantly
about the ancient lives of people so that we can compare the evolution of humans.
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but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, thus, apart from, for example, in conclusion, first of all, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 33.0505617978 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 91.0 58.6224719101 155% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2766.0 2235.4752809 124% => OK
No of words: 545.0 442.535393258 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0752293578 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83169070408 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49925096093 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 215.323595506 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.433027522936 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 855.9 704.065955056 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.6194847211 60.3974514979 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.384615385 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9615384615 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.65384615385 5.21951772744 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 20.0 4.97078651685 402% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 41.0 7.80617977528 525% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.426680799432 0.243740707755 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127311079691 0.0831039109588 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.093684424703 0.0758088955206 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143683016967 0.150359130593 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0745238573246 0.0667264976115 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.1392134831 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 100.480337079 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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