Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
According to the author, men and women are not equally suited for many tasks because of their inherent physical differences. In our society there is believe that women are inherently physically differences, as, women are less stronger than men, less active than the men and are docile in the nature, so, they are not equally suited form any tasks. I strongly disagree with the author claims, in the present world women are equally capable and strong as that of the men in various sectors such as politics, education, industrial sector,etc.
As we can observe that, in the ancient time women are not allowed to speak, learn and free than that of the men. Due to lack of these opportunity women were not able to take them in the leading position in the society as compared to the men. But in the present time, there is freedom for women to involve in the different sectors, speak freely and act as the leader in the different sectors as that of the men. For example, in the political sector there is mostly men dominant than that of the female in the sene that they are not capable in taking the leadership. But in the present world we can observe the female position in the important political and governmental position as that of the men. They are also equally successful in in carried out different decisions as that of men. One of the name of perfect women able to carried out the successful political carrier is the president of the Nepal Mrs. Bhindhya Devi Bhandari, who is capable in taking the handling that position perfectly.
Similarly, the women who are considered to be weak and less capable of doing the different industrial activities in the past world are seems to be due to lack of opportunity for them. In the present world we can observe the women involvement in different industries, constructional works, etc. We can also observe the role of the women in the industrial sector of the european countries. There present in the decision making position of the different industrial and constructional work can be obsereved as that of the men.
Some critics, may explain that the women are still not equally suited for the the different tasks as that of the men, but, it is completely a misconception as the women are not incapable but they are kept away from providing the opportunity in various sectors.
So, i strongly disagree with the author claim that men and women are not equally suited for many tasks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, similarly, so, still, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2018.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 424.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75943396226 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61766423149 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 215.323595506 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.377358490566 0.4932671777 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 640.8 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7655027462 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.705882353 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9411764706 23.4991977007 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64705882353 5.21951772744 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.417120984191 0.243740707755 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149954554534 0.0831039109588 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.180463083928 0.0758088955206 238% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.279476692001 0.150359130593 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.173770792238 0.0667264976115 260% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 14.1392134831 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 100.480337079 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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