Men and Women, because of their inherent physical differences are not equally suited for many tasks.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
There is a tremendous diversity across the world, but when we carefully introspect about the major criteria that is used as a distinguishing factor, we conclude on the major point of the gender of the individual. Men and women, both together have simultaneously inhabited Earth for millenia together. The argument made that men and women are different due to inherent physical differences is true in majority of the cases taht we witness daily. This leads to a major point, that are the tasks equally divided amongs't both men and women.
Firstly, the argument made above seems plausible, due to fact that since the time of our ancestors, the concept of fairness and equality in distribution tasks is severely biased. Men due to their inherent and advanced metabolism and physical fitness as compared to women are assigned tasks like farming, ploughing, working in construction areas,etc all of which require stamina and a healthy physique to sustain and accomplish the task. Women on the other hand are given the jobs of maids and househelp. This diversion is long present in our historyand is firmly entrenched in our morals, ethics and value system.
Another important factor is the ratio of men as to women. In a region where the ratio of men is significantly higher as compared to women, even in the cases of women being more skillful and qualified for the job, due to severe scarcity majority of the tasks end up with men. For example, in the Northeastern states of India like UP and Bihar ,women that seek to study and pursue a future are severly ostarcized and treated indifferently. These social stigmas need to be broken in order to ensure equality in jobs.
Finally, the bilogical and physical factors play a pivotal part in the argument made above. In the field of sports, the timings and records are much faster in the mens category as compared to that in the females category. Generally when a particular task involving physical effort, is given to both a group of men and women respectively, it is expected that the group of men come out victorious.
But there are several cases in the recent past, where women have stepped up and shown that they are not far behind men. Women are provided with a unique skillset and features that men possibly cannot have. This enables women come out and express themselves much more freely as likely in the past. Women are showing the way in many industries and the concept of equality might now seem achievable.
Therefore the differences provided by god during his creation of men and women are both unique and different from each other. How an individual processes it and uses it to his or her advantage is ultimately dependent upon the individual itself.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , etc
...ploughing, working in construction areas,etc all of which require stamina and a heal...
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...he ratio of men is significantly higher as compared to women, even in the cases of...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...astern states of India like UP and Bihar ,women that seek to study and pursue a fu...
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Line 7, column 205, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'females'' or 'female's'?
Suggestion: females'; female's
...ens category as compared to that in the females category. Generally when a particular t...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... equality might now seem achievable. Therefore the differences provided by god during ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, as to, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 14.8657303371 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 58.6224719101 126% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2260.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 463.0 442.535393258 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88120950324 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63868890866 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66440052863 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516198704104 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 731.7 704.065955056 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6191553543 60.3974514979 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.619047619 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0476190476 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09523809524 5.21951772744 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223142914518 0.243740707755 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669345288152 0.0831039109588 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479876600898 0.0758088955206 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113284795648 0.150359130593 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028905863288 0.0667264976115 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.1392134831 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 126.0 100.480337079 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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