The most effective way to understand contemporary culture is to analyze the trends of its youth.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Essay topic:
The most effective way to understand contemporary culture is to analyze the trends of its youth.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Exam type: GRE issue task
With the above information, score this essay out of 6.0:
Everything on this earth is subject to one universal constant: change. Culture is not an exception to the effects or change and this is observable by the ever-changing dynamics of culture which produces new side to the present culture. It is therefore important to understand new changes that are notices within a culture. Now there are numerous ways to do this but the most effective way to do this is to analyse the trends of the youths in that culture.
Firstly, compared to adults, youths are more open to try new things; to applying new concepts. A study by the Nigerian Ministry of art and Culture on the trends of dance culture in Nigeria has shown that approximately 90% of new dance steps are first mastered by the youth. The most plausible reason stated by the study is that youth are more free and ready to explore changes as they come. Therefore, in this instance the most effective way to learn a new trend in the dance culture would be to study the youths in Nigeria.
As a follow up to their willingness to try new things, youth have younger minds and brain so they are easily able to understand and apply new concepts in their culture compared to adults. A neurological study by neurologists in the USA that the younger the brain is the easier it is to understand new information; this is implies to be as a result of the fact that the brain is still relative new compared to that of adults which have begun to age and wizen. Most times the youth are even the ones that apply new concepts the learn through social media in their respective cultures, therefore they are in the best position to understand contemporary cultural changes which is mostly likely effected by them.
However, due to recent advances in technology older generation of citizens now have access to social media and are able to observe changes in their culture over the years. The best they can do is understand, they cannot give an accurate analysis of the changes in their culture because compares to them, the youths find it easier to understand this changes and apply them. For instance the advent of Pidgin language although a cultural variation of English language n south-south Nigeria, slangs form this language such as “Chop” which means eat is best understood by youths of that region.
In conclusion, changes in culture are inevitable the best way to trace these changes and understand contemporary culture would be to analyse trends in te youth. This is because the youths are more open to trying new things and have the younger brains to understand and apply such trends in their culture.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, so, still, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.5258426966 149% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 33.0505617978 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 83.0 58.6224719101 142% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2597.0 2235.4752809 116% => OK
No of words: 541.0 442.535393258 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80036968577 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82280071112 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59951402254 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 215.323595506 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.417744916821 0.4932671777 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 809.1 704.065955056 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.3278188561 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.684210526 118.986275619 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4736842105 23.4991977007 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.31578947368 5.21951772744 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.97078651685 181% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370891408384 0.243740707755 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13161123289 0.0831039109588 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.162829571277 0.0758088955206 215% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177791765983 0.150359130593 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.17190265416 0.0667264976115 258% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 14.1392134831 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 100.480337079 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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