Knowledge is power and is the driving force of success in most careers. The prompt urges that imagination is more important than knowledge in most professions and academic fields. I mostly disagree with this claim and will elaborate on the necessary points to defend my position.
To begin with, imagination is useless in many jobs. For example, an accountant does not need to use their imagination to perform the job well and neither will it be useful at all. It is important to know how to help others file personal and business taxes, which doesn't require any creativity. This is imperative because this is one of the many careers where knowledge will always be more important than imagination.
In addition, aside from professions, an academic field that also doesn't require any type of creative thinking is mathematics. In math, there is always one one correct answer. There may be different ways to come about the same solution, however the end result will always be the same. We cannot imagine different or new ways to solve these problems; therefore, this field of study is one of the many examples of how knowledge is important and imagination is obsolete.
On the other hand, in contrast to my stance, this claim holds true for both professions in the arts. For an artist, being able to get the creative juices flowing on a canvas will always be more important than having knowledge. However, this claim doesn't hold true in a multitude of professions that mostly require crunching numbers. Thus, knowing how to perform the job's duties efficiently will always be more important than imagination.
Nevertheless, although it is true that an imaginative approach can lead to new ways in which things are done, for the reasons that I have explained above knowledge will always trump imagination for most professions and academic fields.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in addition, in contrast, in contrast to, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 2235.4752809 69% => OK
No of words: 308.0 442.535393258 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01948051948 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72296350966 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 215.323595506 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516233766234 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 704.065955056 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.733389704 60.3974514979 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.625 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 5.21951772744 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270296073219 0.243740707755 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0978043929323 0.0831039109588 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677469836828 0.0758088955206 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172910625977 0.150359130593 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0708809392121 0.0667264976115 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 100.480337079 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.