In most professions and academic fields, imagination is more important than
knowledge.
The statement claims that most professions and academic fields, Imagination is better than knowledge for process.It mentions that in every professions like,any financial company or any kind of Business firm for more growth their employees should have more Imagination instead of typical knowledge for that field.It says that Imagination
is better weapon for any innovation instead of knowledge.
The first agreement point is that, because of Imagination you could actually visualize whole process,such as if we consider about mechanical company they often manufactured new machines, but before that they should have rough idea of that Machine, means after implementation of this machine technology will it really fulfilled all need and after that will it be power efficient and cost efficient. these scenarios could possibly fulfilled by imagination process.
Secondly, we can say that having knowledge is first requirement of every new innovation but Imagination is actually based on experience so we can more rely upon imagination for Example,if we concern about any educational institutes , so There are many students and teachers who has enough knowledge about their fields,but when they perform practical experiment at that time they have to visualize whole situation in mind and decide whether this practical gives expected result or not like
if in Chemistry lab they have to do practical on sulfuric acid solution at that time because of acid hardness they should visualize whole situation before experiment.
The disagreement point is that, there are many realistic situation at that time imagination does not work properly at that time we have to apply knowledge instead of Imagination, for example,If there is finance company which manages all shares and equity at that time for prediction of share price in future they should have knowledge about earlier shares prices and have knowledge about calculations and method for predictions of shares.
In conclusion, we can say that for any professions or for any academics field knowledge and imagination is both need for better growth and better performance Sometimes knowledge can easily solve problem , while sometimes imagination
Is require for that.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 28.0 12.9106741573 217% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1884.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 341.0 442.535393258 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52492668622 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89277477962 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507331378299 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 603.9 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.2370786517 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 56.0 23.0359550562 243% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 180.463061779 60.3974514979 299% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 314.0 118.986275619 264% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 56.8333333333 23.4991977007 242% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.8333333333 5.21951772744 342% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158303529328 0.243740707755 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0926411923502 0.0831039109588 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.081553572294 0.0758088955206 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0828058171221 0.150359130593 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101373617883 0.0667264976115 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.0 14.1392134831 233% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -2.28 48.8420337079 -5% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.92365168539 184% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.5 12.1743820225 226% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.62 12.1639044944 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.3 8.38706741573 123% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 11.8971910112 252% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.4 11.2143820225 218% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 11.7820224719 255% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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