In most professions and academic fields, imagination is more important than knowledge.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The prompt suggests that the power of imagination surpasses that of knowledge. While imagination is the mind's paradise, a world engendered by one's own pace of thought, knowledge is more of an acquired ability. The requirement of either trait differs in value from proffession to proffession but the necessity of both is inevitable. it may be more important for a painter to be imaginative given the nature of his craft. Similarly a historian may have to rely heavily on knowledge he has gathered from resources over the years. To succeed in any field of work, one must be both imaginative and knowlegable, but which side of the scale he adds more weight to is dependent on the kind of work.
A knowledgable man has an upperhand in any sphere of life. As they say "only if you know, you yield". Contrary to popular notion, knowledge is not limited to the books we read to pass our exams or lectures we endure at university. it's a vast ocean of unending resourses that include experiences and exposure in abundance. this is beautifully expressed in the industrial internships that most academic instituite promote. The ideas, theories, concepts and more that the student studies about in his academic period, all seem to come to life when he learns the application of it all during his internship. Not only does this broaden his knowledge base, but alsoopens up broad avenues of exploration. knowledge is nothing but the foundation on which experiences, innovations and infact, imagination is built.
Though the power of imagination is supreme and turns out to be the birthing factor for innovations in most field, it is bolstered by the basic theories and concepts. consider an artist paints a visual of his interpretation of the space, what turns out to the most beautiful painting of the century. would he have been able to bring this creative thought of his to life had he not had the knowledge of outer space, however minute? Or would his work of art be considered as artful that the brush strokes and color palletes not been that nuanced? imagination of any form results from the person's knowledge base. only if one knows about something can he start his thought process from there.
To be triumphant in any field of endeavour it is necessary that one is both imaginative and knowledgable. having gathered knowledge and understood the ideas and theories in depth can one proceed further. it isn't possible for a designer to come up with her breakthrough creation if she does not know or understand fabric combination or color coordination best. imagination is not a lone traveller. it walks hand in hand with knowledge. knowledge on the other hand,can go further and beyond its abilities only when the power of imagination drives it through.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 105, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'minds'' or 'mind's'?
Suggestion: minds'; mind's
... of knowledge. While imagination is the minds paradise, a world engendered by ones ow...
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Line 1, column 333, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...ut the necessity of both is inevitable. it may be more important for a painter to ...
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Line 1, column 421, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Similarly,
...ginative given the nature of his craft. Similarly a historian may have to rely heavily on...
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Line 3, column 242, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Its
...ms or lectures we endure at university. its a vast ocean of unending resourses that...
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Line 3, column 242, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ms or lectures we endure at university. its a vast ocean of unending resourses that...
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Line 3, column 333, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
... experiences and exposure in abundance. this is beautifully expressed in the industr...
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Line 3, column 709, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Knowledge
...oopens up broad avenues of exploration. knowledge is nothing but the foundation on which ...
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Line 5, column 167, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Consider
...red by the basic theories and concepts. consider an artist paints a visual of his interp...
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Line 5, column 300, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Would
...most beautiful painting of the century. would he have been able to bring this creativ...
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Line 5, column 545, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Imagination
...d color palletes not been that nuanced? imagination of any form results from the persons kn...
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Line 5, column 586, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...magination of any form results from the persons knowledge base. only if one knows about...
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Line 5, column 610, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Only
...esults from the persons knowledge base. only if one knows about something can he sta...
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Line 7, column 107, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Having
...e is both imaginative and knowledgable. having gathered knowledge and understood the i...
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Line 7, column 205, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...ories in depth can one proceed further. it isnt possible for a designer to come up...
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Line 7, column 208, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...es in depth can one proceed further. it isnt possible for a designer to come up with...
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Line 7, column 361, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Imagination
...combination or color coordination best. imagination is not a lone traveller. it walks hand ...
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Line 7, column 398, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...t. imagination is not a lone traveller. it walks hand in hand with knowledge. know...
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Line 7, column 436, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Knowledge
.... it walks hand in hand with knowledge. knowledge on the other hand,can go further and be...
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Line 7, column 463, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , can
...h knowledge. knowledge on the other hand,can go further and beyond its abilities onl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, similarly, so, while, kind of, you know, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 58.6224719101 125% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2298.0 2235.4752809 103% => OK
No of words: 466.0 442.535393258 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9313304721 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64618479453 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92900453785 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 215.323595506 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519313304721 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 727.2 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.6366150563 60.3974514979 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3846153846 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9230769231 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.34615384615 5.21951772744 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 7.80617977528 243% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15114249116 0.243740707755 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424327178646 0.0831039109588 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411011918209 0.0758088955206 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0919037852137 0.150359130593 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266499808556 0.0667264976115 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 100.480337079 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.