Students are the future of the nation. It might be any nation, but students will always define the nations future , safety , economy and everything. In my opinion, I strongly agree and support the statement that all the students in the nation should study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Following the same curriculum will be a great benefit to the government as it reduces the expenditure on exams. For , example if the entire nation , follows same curriculm then they can have exams on the same day. It also reduces the efforts of the government teachers in preparing the question papers, as now the entire nation can have s single question paper. As , the amount of work(question paper preparation) reduces for the teachers, then they can focus on a single task and they can prepare a good standard question paper which will improve the standard of the students in exam preparation. Because of this , the cost on transportation on question paper from one state to another will also decreases as the transportation happens all at once.
A nation is defined by its literacy rate by other countries. For, example every student in the world like to study in U.S.A as it is good in it's literacy rate. So, if the nation follows the same , curriculum , it will be more easy for the government to calculate the literacy rate based on the exams conducted by the government , as now the entire nation will have same question paper for the same subject. If the states of the nation, follows different curriculum then the literacy rate cannot be calculated easily as some subjects in one state might be easier than the others or the question paper might be much easier. So, if the nation has same curriculum it will be a great advantageous in calculating the literacy rate of the nation.They can also know in which particular the students of the nation are behind and government can ask the teachers to make students focus on that particualr subjects.
There are some people who argue that, every state should have its own curriculum, because of this the state can add their own state native language as primary subject to the curriculum. If the nation follows same curriculum then some states feels that, their state native language will not be in the curriculum, which will be a great disadvantage, as the state students will be never know about the greatness of their native state language and it will be difficult to them to even talk in their own native language. If the states are given the liberty of having their own subjects, then states may add subjects that are not useful in long term like a native language. Students must be taught subjects like English, Maths, Science which will be always there in the students life rather than particular state language. So, hence everyone in the nation should study same subject so that it will also motivates the students to compete in a national wide range rather than a state and this competition will ignate the flames in becoming more successful.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, so, then, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 30.0 12.4196629213 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2500.0 2235.4752809 112% => OK
No of words: 517.0 442.535393258 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83558994197 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76839952204 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58710532589 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.381044487427 0.4932671777 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 801.9 704.065955056 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 3.10617977528 322% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.0326883497 60.3974514979 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.888888889 118.986275619 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7222222222 23.4991977007 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77777777778 5.21951772744 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302046271517 0.243740707755 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140232433543 0.0831039109588 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104453829997 0.0758088955206 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241703418031 0.150359130593 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118360936891 0.0667264976115 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 14.1392134831 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 48.8420337079 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.