Nation's have always be interested and investing in their education system as the nation's future development is based on its present students. The prompt recommends that a nation should enforce all of their students to have the same curriculum in school until they start pursuing higher levels of education. I strongly disagree with this suggestion and argue that students should have flexible curriculums for three reasons.
To begin, students should be able to explore various subjects while they are at school, but a fixed curriculum will not help them do so. For example, a student with a passion in computer science and physics should be allowed to explore various subjects like robotics. If the school isn't allowed to teach a variety of subjects due to it's affliation with the national curriculum then students will not be able to dip their noses in other interesting fields. In the end, when they are about to enter college, they won't be able to choose a major due to lack of experience.
Secondly, with a fixed curriculum, then there is no chance for students to study region specific languages. For instance, in a country like India with a vast number of languages, a Telugu student in a school with an immutable curriculum, where the only languages which are supposed to be learnt are English and Hindi, will never be able to learn about his mother tongue and it's history at his school. Due to a curriculum common throughout the nation students will not be exposed to their native languages at school, which may be a negative impact of their heritage and culture.
Finally, with a fixed curriculum, the nation will not be able to compete with other nations in various worldwide olympiads. For example, if the nation's curriculum doesn't include computer science then students from that country cannot represent them in the IOI(Internation Olympiad for Informatics) which is a prestigious competitive coding competition for high school students all around the world. It is important for students of a country to have global exposure and compete with students from all around the world to have a rich learning experience.
To conclude, one may argue that if a nation has a fixed curriculum, then all private and public schools will teach the same syllabus to everyone, ensuring no wrong information is taught to children. However, the solution for teaching false information is not forcing all of the school's to have the same curriculum, but keeping a check on the content which is being taught at schools. Thus, nation's should allow their school's to come up with their own curriculums.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 21, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
Nations have always be interested and investing in their educa...
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Line 3, column 269, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...explore various subjects like robotics. If the school isnt allowed to teach a vari...
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Line 3, column 283, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...s subjects like robotics. If the school isnt allowed to teach a variety of subjects ...
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Line 3, column 296, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'teaching'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: teaching
...ke robotics. If the school isnt allowed to teach a variety of subjects due to its afflia...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 145, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...orldwide olympiads. For example, if the nations curriculum doesnt include computer scie...
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Line 7, column 164, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... For example, if the nations curriculum doesnt include computer science then students ...
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Line 9, column 268, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...aching false information is not forcing all of the schools to have the same curriculum, bu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, thus, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2169.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 433.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00923787529 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70559570543 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.461893764434 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 661.5 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.816524211 60.3974514979 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.5625 118.986275619 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0625 23.4991977007 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 5.21951772744 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333606133957 0.243740707755 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134770186275 0.0831039109588 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670134409057 0.0758088955206 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218053001718 0.150359130593 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0758107139617 0.0667264976115 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 14.1392134831 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 48.8420337079 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.1743820225 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.