A nation should require all its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college rather than allow schools in different parts of the nation to determine which academic courses to offer.
Currently, not all countries mandate same national curriculum throught the nation. Different states have created their own curriculums which would be implemented in most the schools in the state. If we look at India, different states have created their own curriculums called state curriculums and their is one more curriculum called CBSE which is created by central government of India and this is being followed by many schools across difffernt states.
I believe that implementing a common curriculum across all schools in the nation is a good idea except for subjects such as regional languages and regional history.
It's because different regions in the country might be having different local languages and it's important that the students from that region learn their local languages. Same is that case with local history.
However, for subjects such as physics, biology, matchs, english, economics, national history which would be applicable throught the country need to have common curriculum because if a student is moving to a different part of the country then will be able to easily adjust and continue his education. Also, when students from different parts of country enter college they all will have same educational background and it will be easier to frame college curriculum as well since everyone has same knowledge. This also makes sure that two students with same calibre and commitment perform equally when they are college which might not be the case if they have different curriculums in schools.
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- A nation should require all its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college rather than allow schools in different parts of the nation to determine which academic courses to offer 33
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 299, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...urriculums called state curriculums and their is one more curriculum called CBSE whic...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, then, well, except for, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 58.6224719101 39% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1287.0 2235.4752809 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 243.0 442.535393258 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2962962963 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.55969084622 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62716513506 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 215.323595506 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530864197531 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 704.065955056 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.8845299145 60.3974514979 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.0 118.986275619 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 23.4991977007 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.21951772744 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297755670556 0.243740707755 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143636333251 0.0831039109588 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788639979682 0.0758088955206 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172077164592 0.150359130593 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585763095229 0.0667264976115 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 14.1392134831 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 100.480337079 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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