A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Designing a curriculum has always been an intricate and a consequential task. The prompt states that a nation should have a common curriculum for all the students. I mostly disagree with the prompt that a nation should make stringent amendments regarding a common curriculum studied by its students before moving to college. This would lead to students spending more time on learning subjects which they do not want to pursue in future, and as well as it would also impair the diversity among the curriculums among different regions.
In high school, it is about the right time for a student to ruminate over the career choices he/she wants to undertake in future, and be selective of the subjects appropriately. However, if there's a strict curriculum imposed by the nation for all the students, it will force them to study subjects which do not interest them. Apart from this, learning subjects which appeal to the students will pave the way for college education, and develop enthusiasm in them regarding that field. For instance, a student interested in pursuing a career in Arts, should learn subjects related to the artistic field only. However, if he/she is forced to study STEM subjects like Physics, Computer Science etc. it would be futile, and would not be the proper utilisation of his/her time. This wasted time should be used for learning Arts in depth, and exploring the different virtues of the subject. Therefore, it would not be pertinent of the educational system to have a common curriculum across the nation.
A nations' curriculum is reflective of its diversity, consequently more eclectic a nation is, more comprehensive and inclusive should be the curriculum. Different elements or subjects, which may seem irrelevant to some part of nation, are indispensable to for adjacent region. For instance, in a country like India which is highly diverse and comprises of people belonging to different religion, culture and ethnicity, this parochial approach of having a common curriculum would be devastating, and might instigate resentment among the society. As India has different languages like Hindi, Kannada, Tamil, Punjabi and many more, depriving students from learning their mother tongue would be highly unfair, similarly forcing a student in Punjab to learn Tamil would be inimical as well. Thus, a common curriculum would in turn hamper the diversity in learning, which pivotal for a nation.
However, if all the students study same curriculum, they will be exposed to different fields of study, and can explore their options before enrolling themselves in a college degree. But, this can be achieved through workshops and sessions organised by the institutions, in helping its students making a decision regarding the career options available.
Conclusively, I believe that a having a common curriculum across the nation might give extra time to students to study different subjects, instead of making a allowing them to make a hasty decision of dropping them. However, this approach leads to time wastage which could be utilised for in-depth learning of a subject which actually engender interest and zeal among the student. Apart from this, a common curriculum would also be insular and estrange students from learning their regional subjects.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 427, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...bjects which they do not want to pursue in future, and as well as it would also impair th...
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...areer choices he/she wants to undertake in future, and be selective of the subjects appro...
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Line 3, column 191, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: there's
...the subjects appropriately. However, if theres a strict curriculum imposed by the nati...
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Line 5, column 3, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...mmon curriculum across the nation. A nations curriculum is reflective of its diversi...
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Line 5, column 343, Rule ID: COMPRISES_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of
... like India which is highly diverse and comprises of people belonging to different religion,...
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Line 9, column 158, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...y different subjects, instead of making a allowing them to make a hasty decision ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, consequently, however, if, may, regarding, similarly, so, therefore, thus, well, apart from, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 12.4196629213 193% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2761.0 2235.4752809 124% => OK
No of words: 525.0 442.535393258 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25904761905 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78673985869 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7854992184 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 215.323595506 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.468571428571 0.4932671777 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 852.3 704.065955056 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.77640449438 394% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6665244822 60.3974514979 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.5 118.986275619 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8636363636 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 5.21951772744 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254483088927 0.243740707755 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0941378579541 0.0831039109588 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526065040832 0.0758088955206 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171206696362 0.150359130593 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298187989315 0.0667264976115 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 133.0 100.480337079 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 427, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...bjects which they do not want to pursue in future, and as well as it would also impair th...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 120, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...areer choices he/she wants to undertake in future, and be selective of the subjects appro...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 191, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: there's
...the subjects appropriately. However, if theres a strict curriculum imposed by the nati...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 3, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...mmon curriculum across the nation. A nations curriculum is reflective of its diversi...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 343, Rule ID: COMPRISES_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of
... like India which is highly diverse and comprises of people belonging to different religion,...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 158, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...y different subjects, instead of making a allowing them to make a hasty decision ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, consequently, however, if, may, regarding, similarly, so, therefore, thus, well, apart from, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 12.4196629213 193% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2761.0 2235.4752809 124% => OK
No of words: 525.0 442.535393258 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25904761905 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78673985869 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7854992184 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 215.323595506 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.468571428571 0.4932671777 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 852.3 704.065955056 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.77640449438 394% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6665244822 60.3974514979 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.5 118.986275619 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8636363636 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 5.21951772744 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254483088927 0.243740707755 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0941378579541 0.0831039109588 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526065040832 0.0758088955206 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171206696362 0.150359130593 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298187989315 0.0667264976115 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 133.0 100.480337079 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.