A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting you position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Education that comes before entering college is the most important of the a students life. Everything a student learns as young as they are, it stays with them longer. Students show the area in which they are actually strong at and what they are interested in when they are young. So I mostly disagree with the point given and state that we must identify, acknowledge and be prepared to provide them with a curriculum that nurtures those area in a student.
Firstly, every student are different from one another. Few are good at sports, few are at maths, psychology, etcetra. They wont be able to experience in the field they have more affinity to when they are more concentrated on other subjects that doesnt have anything to do with their interest. It also pushes them away from education. Providing the students with materials that are more related to their interest could help them improve in their field which inadvertently boosts their opinion towards education.
Second of all, The subjects that a student learns in current curriculumn is nowhere related to the job that they end up working at. Most of the subject are not practical or real world related problems. Subjects like history, geography are all available in internet that studying them would be of no consequence. So providing them with real world related problems and curriculumn in their interested field would help them be more successful in their career and also waste less time in their childhood.
Althought there are subject that are required to be learnt by everyone like language, first aid, general knowledge, economics, basic mathematics and science, which would help them in life when they are faced with common problems. But these only help them to an extent and requiring to go through all the other subject are unnecessary and time consuming.
So i would like to conclude by saying that catering education according to a students like and interest is more crucial.
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- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: the; a
...tering college is the most important of the a students life. Everything a student lea...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
... college is the most important of the a students life. Everything a student learns as yo...
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...e interested in when they are young. So I mostly disagree with the point given an...
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Message: Did you mean 'this area' or 'those areas'?
Suggestion: this area; those areas
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...e unnecessary and time consuming. So i would like to conclude by saying that c...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ents like and interest is more crucial.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, if, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1633.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 327.0 442.535393258 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99388379205 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59557914811 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51376146789 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 704.065955056 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2975140133 60.3974514979 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0625 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4375 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1875 5.21951772744 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151246042541 0.243740707755 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556115596806 0.0831039109588 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394523275334 0.0758088955206 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.088599106488 0.150359130593 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550410419463 0.0667264976115 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 14.1392134831 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 100.480337079 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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